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3/16/2010 c1 dustiestbutterfly
i actually liked these two better than Sandra and Luke! great first chapter- hope this turns out as good as Hooked onto him-

is the spelling sceptical or skeptical?- im not really that good in english- its not my native tongue but maybe it can be spelt both ways?
3/16/2010 c1 5Wedgiee

This is top stuff :)

can't wait to see more!

I kinda think I know where this is going, however I KNOW there will be twists :P

will we see RL lucas?
3/16/2010 c1 faithful.dream
ohh, i like it!

im totally team caron and reece right now!

but, youve still only put up the first chapter, so my opinion might change.

BUT STILL carson and reece would be cute!

update soon please
3/16/2010 c1 RedMae
Can't wait to read what happens next! Pretty good so far!
3/15/2010 c1 31Cupid's Jinx
It's her, isn't it?

-sniffle- Bless, poor Reece!

-muses- He must be pretty good at hiding it, if no-one else knows...

I'm sticking around, as always! ^.^


3/15/2010 c1 1Medu
Heyy It's shimmer showdown here. I had to change my name 'coz my best friend was pestering me to :|

Well I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

It's good to see you back (:

It doesn't have to be Lucas or Sandra as long as you are the author.

I guess you would have already received my message but i just wanted to let you know that I decided to write a story and I've put up my 1st chapter. Can you let me know what you think of it?

Your amazing

3/15/2010 c1 Downtown Detours
Yess, another story by you. :]

I can feel the drama already that will happen later on haha.

Also, nice names. I've always loved girls with guy type names like Carson.

Looking forward to more of the story.
3/15/2010 c1 1Moo-moo-cowz
Here I am once again! A faithful reader! First off, I love the characters and I think this is going to be just as funny and great as hooked on him and not quite off the hook. Like you said, they aren't Sandra and Lucas, but I already love them, I cant help it. I know this isn't your other books with Lucas in them, but are you going to keep writing the RL Lucas's?
3/15/2010 c1 Sweatered5Hatchets
It's interesting and like the chapter. Can't wait for the next update(:
3/15/2010 c1 lilaclia
I'm bursting with excitement here. I was surprised to be on MSN, and get this update. And disappointed that I am not the first reviewer, but am one of the top ones so far. Okay, first off, this is amazing. I think I might like this a lot. The feel for this story is awesome. I read the description and I love those kinds because they confuse me and I try to figure it out. I figured this one out, as best as I could with that limited information,and I instantly liked it. after reading the chapter, I can say I love Reece. His character is genuine, sweet and he is so in love. I wonder who that girl is... NOT. You've dropped enough hints, and to say Carson is dense, is an understatement. God, she's known this guy for years, they're probably like peanut butter and jelly and she doesn't realize a thing! That makes me love it even more, absurd but true. Carson's character is unique, she hates being social and would rather have time alone for herself, and she hates the spotlight. I've always liked the name Carson, and I like how her personality fits the name. The first chapter was great and I noticed that your writing style here, is different than it was in your other two stories. I like it a lot, and it's great. I wonder how things are going to work out for Reece trying to help Carson fall in love with two guys. His friend and himself. I admire the title, its unique and attractive. Great first chapter, really, really can't wait to read more. And I'm not sorry for this extremely long review because I'm bursting with excitement here! :)
3/15/2010 c1 2Magin 2152
AH!11 YES YES YES i'm so glad you're back. i can tell this next chapter is going to rock so much. i already love it! hurry up and keep poting. I knew that this new story would be awesome just like your loast. i just know you are going to get more and more hits on this story. WOP WHOP!
3/15/2010 c1 6Broken Lies
I like it so far it's interesting :) cnt wait for the next chap! Also r u gonna do rl luscas updates ? I hpe soo

-broken lies
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