for Petalled3/20/2011 c1 
2dragonflydreamer
(OH! I just realized that last poem was a string of haiku. That definitely explain the line breaks. My apologies ^^;)
I love the way you use the petal falling image. I've seen it a lot, but not anything like this. You have a very interesting and unique message, and a great ending because it summed it all up so well.
[you brushed it/away and goodbye)] This wording was a little odd. You wouldn't say "you brushed it goodbye."
[to be destined/by greater things/that they do not/see with their/hearts] Hm, interesting idea.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
2dragonflydreamer(OH! I just realized that last poem was a string of haiku. That definitely explain the line breaks. My apologies ^^;)
I love the way you use the petal falling image. I've seen it a lot, but not anything like this. You have a very interesting and unique message, and a great ending because it summed it all up so well.
[you brushed it/away and goodbye)] This wording was a little odd. You wouldn't say "you brushed it goodbye."
[to be destined/by greater things/that they do not/see with their/hearts] Hm, interesting idea.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)