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for The Woman In The Moon

6/13/2012 c1 12Gimme Back My Pigeon
Whoaz. I really liked this poem. Short yet...comfortably short in a way, for me. Loved the imagery you weaved through it, and the dialogue you incorporate is unique and smart. "Washing me translucent with his eyes" literally made me smile.

And I thought I was the only one who wrote, "The sky/water/clouds/whatever freaking abiotic factor blinked this color/this emotion..."

I'm seeing more of your love of words through your word choice. And I think if I'd have to say which one is my favorite line, I'd pick all of them. Nicely done.

-feeling weird writing nearly 3 paragraphs of a review on an 11-lined poem-

5/28/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
Wow. This is lovely, very lovely. Amazing job writing this piece, keep it up :D

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