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for The End is Begun

3/26/2010 c1 Arv
Good Sci-Fi story telling. I like what I have read in this first chapter.

Writing style is good (a few awkward sentences, but nothing really bad).

Spelling is quite good. Plot line is interesting (new twist on an old theme...and quite interesting).

I will be back when you have more available to read.

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