for His Return4/12/2010 c1 
67Bradly
The poem has a nice smooth flow to it and the feelings well portrayed. I think it's a feeling a lot of people can relate to. A well written poem, I enjoyed reading it. :)
67BradlyThe poem has a nice smooth flow to it and the feelings well portrayed. I think it's a feeling a lot of people can relate to. A well written poem, I enjoyed reading it. :)
3/17/2010 c1 62Averybarbarian
'Tis truly a lovely write. You keep each stanza short yet powerful and full of emotion. Very good poem. Well done. I enjoyed reading it
62Averybarbarian'Tis truly a lovely write. You keep each stanza short yet powerful and full of emotion. Very good poem. Well done. I enjoyed reading it