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1/27/2015 c6 ummm
are they 18 or 8, who goes to parties without booze esp an after game party. Are you sure you're writing about 18 year olds...
6/26/2014 c18 Sandy
Hi there, I really the idea behind this story and I love Nate so much :) Hmm, I just felt that the revelation that Rachel is Roxy was a bit anticlimatic.
11/16/2013 c1 e
yur story sucks! Like so bad. You do not have a solid story. You should try to rewrite yur story with more life to it becos it luks like u ar copying a disney tv series. Stupid story!
11/7/2013 c18 2PaintedPicture
I'm glad she wasn't as bitchy and selfish anymore. I liked this story, good going, although it did remind me of the hannah montana movie
11/11/2012 c18 RubyRed22
Cuuuuuute... I loved this story. I think you're a really good writer. :D
11/11/2012 c17 RubyRed22
Awwww. Kind of bittersweet, eh? I hope it all works out though!
11/11/2012 c14 RubyRed22
I don't think it sound rushed, actually! And I love how that ugly toad stuffed animal comes up every now and then! Makes me laugh every time. ;)
11/10/2012 c1 RubyRed22
Wow! This already sounds soooo interesting! :D
5/2/2012 c18 KEverdeen
Just wanted to let you know that I looooove this story (:
1/1/2012 c18 Sugar Glider
Omg! AMAZING STORY! :D I'm going to recremend this story on every review I do for any story. Also have u ever been 2 fanfiction.net/book/fablehaven. They have good stories on there. Oh and happy new years! :D. Also do u no when the next warriors book is coming out? If u read them? I just read the forgotten warrior the fifth book of the forth series and I think ppl say the next book the last hope is comin out in April. Aww! Anyways great amazing super totally awesome story and again...Happy New Years! Hehe -puts out fireworks of red white and blue- bye! -Sugar Glider
11/22/2011 c18 3laughing my a. off
awwwwww... That was adorable!
10/21/2011 c18 i-wish-i-had-wings
i must say i liked the theme here, and i am really happy that you didn't make her into hannah montana xD i've only watched an episode or two, but that show is AWFUL!

i'm glad that brady and tiffany got together, i hate when someone is left hurt.. i am a little disappointed of what happened with chantal though, the three of them seemed to be great friends =( i didn't like that you turned her into a bitch at the end, i just don't see the neccessity of it, she had a right to be angry and stop being rachel's friend after rachel didn't tell her that she too liked nate. in my opinion rachel was a bad friend first, she should have respected chantal enough to tell her! sorry about the rant =p

thank you for posting it, i really enjoyed reading it =)
4/12/2011 c18 1TheLastFireBender
2/19/2011 c18 3AJS
Cute story. I like that the guy who she ended up with wasn't actually a guy from the school she attended. I guess in a sense it's weird though since why now? But it was spurred by their jealousy of seeing each other with other people.

I think this was a cute story, but there were some things you started but never really answered. For example, who was the girl that Nathan was referring to on the roof in the beginning when he said he had been in love? It seemed like it was Rachel, but it was never confirmed, and later on you made it sound like Nathan had been denying his feelings all along too (even though it didn't really seem like he had). Another thing was the drift between Rachel and Ren and how he was acting differently - what was going on there? Also why had Brady suddenly started acting weird that one time? Why did he turn sour around Nathan, even when he was under the impression that they were cousins? Was there ever indication that he suspected they were something more?

I also don't like how Chantal just suddenly turned evil at the end. It definitely doesn't seem plausible that she'd ditch her best friend, Tiffany. I would have thought she'd have acted a little more humane. Pissed, hurt, sure, but it's a guy... and really? She would let a guy come between her and Tiffany? Also I think you should have shown the attraction between Tiffany and Brady throughout the story if that's how you were going to end it. I can't really recall any time they actually interacted. Also Chloe suddenly being Tiffany and Chantals' friend was weird too. Since when had they been friends? There was never any indication of that.

So overall it was a cute story, but with a lot of holes, untied endings, and things to be improved on. I like the overall plot of the story and I like Nathan. :) Best of luck on your future stories!

- Alyssa
1/18/2011 c18 4iheartshoes
This story is really good :) I love the characters and the plot line; I prefer to read romance stories that aren't based in high school, but yours was a welcome exception!

You so deserve more than 98 reviews for this; it's coherent, well thought through and the characters are quite in tune with one another :)

I'll be adding this to my favourites!
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