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12/19/2010 c1 26pinkguppie
I really would like a gay friend - Daren sounds amazing. Apparently they are quite awesome... hmm now top of my Santa list. Her aunt sounds amazing.

-About half way down when she wakes up at his place she thinks 'my mom would kill me' - do you mean 'my mom would have killed me' or 'my aunt would kill me'?

A little after that it says 'tired oh home'. of?

Fantastic story - good character construction. One thing(that I do a lot too) is that the story moves very fast, if you wanted to make it more realistic it should take place over a longer time period. Great work though :)
9/16/2010 c1 8Creative Pumpkin
just to start off... AWESOME! also, you said she was 18, but then said that he proposed to her a few years afterward, but first you said that she was 18 years old...
7/18/2010 c1 7BurningDecks
Aw man I love you (L)
5/1/2010 c1 5not-so-muggle
Ahh this is ALSO so cute :) I read three years first and now I read this one. Oh I love it :D You should write longer chaptered stories! :)

Love it:)

3/19/2010 c1 fullybooked
That was an awesome story! Really cute.

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