for A love poem3/29/2010 c1 
17EliMerriman
The greatest quality of your poems, I think, is that everything makes sense at the end. Reading the poem is like watching you begin to stack dominoes, and the last two lines are like the toppling of the dominoe structure. This is a very cute poem, and gives a very wonderful feeling. I am glad to see more of yours on here.
17EliMerrimanThe greatest quality of your poems, I think, is that everything makes sense at the end. Reading the poem is like watching you begin to stack dominoes, and the last two lines are like the toppling of the dominoe structure. This is a very cute poem, and gives a very wonderful feeling. I am glad to see more of yours on here.