for The Keeping1/6/2022 c5 Mirandamau
halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Miranda, an editor for a fast growing platform, may i know how to reach you professionally?
halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Miranda, an editor for a fast growing platform, may i know how to reach you professionally?
9/30/2021 c1 dramalover21
Sad that these aren’t up anymore. Even sadder that the published version of the book doesn’t have any of the love scenes the FP version had which is really disappointing. Part of what made these stories so good on here was that they read like a real adult romance. Why ever did you convert to a fade to black in the published version?
Sad that these aren’t up anymore. Even sadder that the published version of the book doesn’t have any of the love scenes the FP version had which is really disappointing. Part of what made these stories so good on here was that they read like a real adult romance. Why ever did you convert to a fade to black in the published version?
5/12/2015 c43 Guest x
Great work XX Read " The Mating " and thoroughly enjoyed it XX
After Ryne actually appeared in the story, near its end, he quickly became my favourite character x
So glad you continued on a story for him x You could go on forever with these xxx
Well done x!
Great work XX Read " The Mating " and thoroughly enjoyed it XX
After Ryne actually appeared in the story, near its end, he quickly became my favourite character x
So glad you continued on a story for him x You could go on forever with these xxx
Well done x!
12/13/2014 c1 Ummm
SKOW winner? I'd put this in last places. I don't even know who nominated this story in the Sex with Kittens, Ogres, and Witches poll.
lame. no witch sex.
0/5 stars
SKOW winner? I'd put this in last places. I don't even know who nominated this story in the Sex with Kittens, Ogres, and Witches poll.
lame. no witch sex.
0/5 stars
5/2/2014 c43 Chy
I have read both the Mating & the Keeping...I enjoyed every bit of it. This is a great book to read. I gladly recommended a must read and can't believe its over after I started liking the characters. :'(
I have read both the Mating & the Keeping...I enjoyed every bit of it. This is a great book to read. I gladly recommended a must read and can't believe its over after I started liking the characters. :'(
3/30/2014 c21 betallen
I really am enjoying your story. I can understand the problem with the word filler since without it we wouldn't understand the characters nor how they react to certain things and why. but you have to remember some people just like being back seat drivers love to tell people how to write even if they would cause the story to crash and burn if they had their way about it. You are doing awesome so don't let them bother you..and i hope things get less stressing for you. thank you for sharing your awesome talent with us.
I really am enjoying your story. I can understand the problem with the word filler since without it we wouldn't understand the characters nor how they react to certain things and why. but you have to remember some people just like being back seat drivers love to tell people how to write even if they would cause the story to crash and burn if they had their way about it. You are doing awesome so don't let them bother you..and i hope things get less stressing for you. thank you for sharing your awesome talent with us.
3/26/2014 c3 
1WYMamataro
I've been hooked on your stories for days! I have a term paper due and two exams tomorrow but I CAN'T BULGE FROM THIS! XD
1WYMamataroI've been hooked on your stories for days! I have a term paper due and two exams tomorrow but I CAN'T BULGE FROM THIS! XD
2/20/2014 c33 THE NIGERIAN
1st time commenting. I'm guessing the Mel and Ryne blood bonded without knowing about it during the bar fight. I suspect she's got Lycan ancestry and the bond triggered it? Dunno. Ryne's a jerk, but he's pretty cool.
1st time commenting. I'm guessing the Mel and Ryne blood bonded without knowing about it during the bar fight. I suspect she's got Lycan ancestry and the bond triggered it? Dunno. Ryne's a jerk, but he's pretty cool.
12/16/2013 c43 Jason Cullen
I loved this book! I like the series! Can't wait to read the next one!
I loved this book! I like the series! Can't wait to read the next one!
7/24/2013 c39 earthbender068
oh Kane! and Helen is the perfect example of a leaders wife. that entire pack should look up to her. she's willing to sacrifice herself when I'm sure Kane would let leave with the others. Kane...these semi rogue guys, Kane, Reno, Ryne, and Damien love hard don't they?
i bet Reno and melody smell great too.
oh Kane! and Helen is the perfect example of a leaders wife. that entire pack should look up to her. she's willing to sacrifice herself when I'm sure Kane would let leave with the others. Kane...these semi rogue guys, Kane, Reno, Ryne, and Damien love hard don't they?
i bet Reno and melody smell great too.
7/24/2013 c38 earthbender068
you know after reading some of betrayal...I know wonder if Greyson was part fae. it seems to fit. the knowledge of danger and the ability to read his competition or a situation. I'm happy that Cassandra was named after his mom. it is a sad situation that he lost the love of his life and then had to raise this little girl all alone. you know if Grayson was a lycan, he'd make on hellava alpha. though he's not that compassionate, so I can see him as a rogue.
you know after reading some of betrayal...I know wonder if Greyson was part fae. it seems to fit. the knowledge of danger and the ability to read his competition or a situation. I'm happy that Cassandra was named after his mom. it is a sad situation that he lost the love of his life and then had to raise this little girl all alone. you know if Grayson was a lycan, he'd make on hellava alpha. though he's not that compassionate, so I can see him as a rogue.
7/24/2013 c37 earthbender068
oh doesn't ryne know the moment you tell someone not to think of something, that's all they can think about? geez! I love when the two of them argue. it seems so natural. even more so than Reno and brandy.
and finally she figures out the beauty of her dream, lol!
oh doesn't ryne know the moment you tell someone not to think of something, that's all they can think about? geez! I love when the two of them argue. it seems so natural. even more so than Reno and brandy.
and finally she figures out the beauty of her dream, lol!