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9/2/2010 c3 Methus 2
wow this virus thing is so cool, it attacks the DNA of the host, its a really clever idea, how did you come up with it? Anyway, better keep reading :)
9/2/2010 c1 Methus 2
A really great story so far, can't wait to read more :)
4/5/2010 c1 2StephanieSoung
Avery is a very likeable character. This story has potentional, update soon!
3/25/2010 c1 1Peter Venuti
Hey there,

I think you're story line idea is decent. I didn't like a lot of your word choice and your word place, however, I liked how you gave backround information in dialog. It certainly has potential, but I think it needs more work.
3/22/2010 c4 SalvatoreEighteenSixtyFour
This really is a good story, and I hope you update soon! :D
3/22/2010 c3 SalvatoreEighteenSixtyFour
O_O Extinction of the human race? Well, THAT'S not good.
3/22/2010 c2 SalvatoreEighteenSixtyFour
I noticed an error near the end of this chapter. 'Who's' should be 'whose'. But everything else looked great. :)
3/22/2010 c1 SalvatoreEighteenSixtyFour
This is a very intriguing story. Avery seems like a cool character, and I like the fact that this is apparantly set far in the future. But I'm very curious about this 'syndrome', though...

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