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3/21/2010 c1 10HoodedStellaish
This story was good, even if I have no idea what's going on. To save you from flame-reviews I'll give you a piece of advice. EXPLAIN EVERTHING except rocks and useless stuff. Like Olivia and her brother, any good memories you'd like to share with the class? Janet, did Olivia notice something different about her (besides the height thing)? Where's Olivia's parents?

Stuff to consider, and stuff that I'm STILL trying to perfect without being boring. *Sigh* Can't have it all.

I really love you're story so keep it up!

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