for Your Guardian Angel4/11/2010 c3 Eleana Brooke
yay! GO SPEED RACER! XD *dances around like a moron* awesome chappie! i cant wait til more! XD
yay! GO SPEED RACER! XD *dances around like a moron* awesome chappie! i cant wait til more! XD
3/24/2010 c2 
9Tatiana Knight
Hey. I just wanted to review and tell you that your story had real potental, I'm very interested in it so far. Keep writing!
I realized that you didn't capitalize a lot of things properly. The beginning of sentences, no matter if it's dialogue or otherwise, needs to be capitalized.
:)
Please don't take offense to me pointing it out but a lot of people look at the asthetics of a story before reading. They see the non-capitals where they should be and then hit the back button because they feel that if you can't capitalize correctly that you probably have a bad story.
x.
Tatiana
9Tatiana KnightHey. I just wanted to review and tell you that your story had real potental, I'm very interested in it so far. Keep writing!
I realized that you didn't capitalize a lot of things properly. The beginning of sentences, no matter if it's dialogue or otherwise, needs to be capitalized.
:)
Please don't take offense to me pointing it out but a lot of people look at the asthetics of a story before reading. They see the non-capitals where they should be and then hit the back button because they feel that if you can't capitalize correctly that you probably have a bad story.
x.
Tatiana
3/23/2010 c2 Eleana Brooke
yay! i loves it! more more more! XD this is so good! you get a cookie! *hands you a cookie* (^_^)
yay! i loves it! more more more! XD this is so good! you get a cookie! *hands you a cookie* (^_^)