for Keening4/11/2010 c1 recycle rhymes
it's pretty. i really like the repetition and imagery. really added to the sound: the line "i want you like a woman" nice work.
it's pretty. i really like the repetition and imagery. really added to the sound: the line "i want you like a woman" nice work.
3/26/2010 c1 
1k+Faithless Juliet
There's a lot of desire in this one, yet it doesn't scream "fuck me". I really enjoyed the subtlety of it, and as per your usual, it was rich with detail. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietThere's a lot of desire in this one, yet it doesn't scream "fuck me". I really enjoyed the subtlety of it, and as per your usual, it was rich with detail. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.