for A Rose for Rebecca Bernstein5/12/2010 c1 
15dbz 77
This was an interesting short story. I liked how you described the narrator's feelings, and I liked the comparison to the centurion during Christ's crucifixion.
15dbz 77This was an interesting short story. I liked how you described the narrator's feelings, and I liked the comparison to the centurion during Christ's crucifixion.
4/30/2010 c1 1Outlaw's Daughter
Tragic, beautiful, and moving. I like the comparison to Pilate and Christ.
1Outlaw's DaughterTragic, beautiful, and moving. I like the comparison to Pilate and Christ.
3/30/2010 c1 1AtiyaMonae
Moving.
Honestly, this is so beautiful. The description and the emotions painted in it were so vivid.
Amazing. ")
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1AtiyaMonaeMoving.
Honestly, this is so beautiful. The description and the emotions painted in it were so vivid.
Amazing. ")
xx
3/30/2010 c1 1Ancolie
I loved this. It was heartbreaking, but I think you did an amazing job humanizing the young Nazi. A very interesting and well written piece. :)
1AncolieI loved this. It was heartbreaking, but I think you did an amazing job humanizing the young Nazi. A very interesting and well written piece. :)
3/29/2010 c1 sophoes
I think this is written really well :) Personally I don't have a problem with the Haulocaust theme, I thought it was really powerful and effective, and i have to say i love the bit whrre he leaves a rose for her :P
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I think this is written really well :) Personally I don't have a problem with the Haulocaust theme, I thought it was really powerful and effective, and i have to say i love the bit whrre he leaves a rose for her :P
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3/26/2010 c1 13Ebrethiel
Amazingly descriptive and well-written. I didn't enjoy it, particularly because I don't like the genre/s you've used.
I only have one other issue, where you've written "I wept into myself". I don't entirely understand what that means or what you're trying to say.
Other than that and my personal genre issues, it was a good piece :)
13EbrethielAmazingly descriptive and well-written. I didn't enjoy it, particularly because I don't like the genre/s you've used.
I only have one other issue, where you've written "I wept into myself". I don't entirely understand what that means or what you're trying to say.
Other than that and my personal genre issues, it was a good piece :)