for Dream Eater7/8/2013 c1 Lord D'arcy Picklesouse
AWEsome imagery...some of the most beautiful lines here on fictionpress...
you are really rekindling my sense of poetic imagery thankss...
AWEsome imagery...some of the most beautiful lines here on fictionpress...
you are really rekindling my sense of poetic imagery thankss...
3/24/2011 c1 
28Michael Kelso
I liked this. "The clouds spread their jaws with greed, revealing a mouthful of stars," That's wonderful. It flows, it's very visual... Well done. Excellent job.
28Michael KelsoI liked this. "The clouds spread their jaws with greed, revealing a mouthful of stars," That's wonderful. It flows, it's very visual... Well done. Excellent job.
4/2/2010 c1 43Dante's Disciple
This is a pretty pessimistic thought, that most dreams never come to be. But true sadly.
Well written with good flow, very good!
43Dante's DiscipleThis is a pretty pessimistic thought, that most dreams never come to be. But true sadly.
Well written with good flow, very good!
4/1/2010 c1 2imaginarydeathmuffin
This is one of the most intriguing and meaningful poems i have ever read. I like it very much :)
2imaginarydeathmuffinThis is one of the most intriguing and meaningful poems i have ever read. I like it very much :)