for Hailstorm3/11/2013 c24 
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I believe this was a suitable ending to Hailstorm. I loved this story and all of the great adventure and action with it. I'm definitely going to read your other story as well.
13RevampI believe this was a suitable ending to Hailstorm. I loved this story and all of the great adventure and action with it. I'm definitely going to read your other story as well.
3/11/2013 c23 Revamp
This is a nice final chapter . I'm glad Hail and Zhanna could work outeverything between them andcan settle intoworking towards being a happy family.
This is a nice final chapter . I'm glad Hail and Zhanna could work outeverything between them andcan settle intoworking towards being a happy family.
3/11/2013 c22 Revamp
I love the action in this chapter. Great fight with Nemisis and Ruin. I'm looking forward to your conclusion.
I love the action in this chapter. Great fight with Nemisis and Ruin. I'm looking forward to your conclusion.
3/11/2013 c21 Revamp
I like the depth of Hail's guilt and his power to overcome it. I also love the background on Nemisis and Ruin. Great chapter, it and emotional especially on Hail's end.
I like the depth of Hail's guilt and his power to overcome it. I also love the background on Nemisis and Ruin. Great chapter, it and emotional especially on Hail's end.
3/11/2013 c20 Revamp
Nice reunion with the prisoners as well as that heart felt moment with Noah and Connor. I wonder what's ahead for Ruin and Nemisis as well. Great chapter.
Nice reunion with the prisoners as well as that heart felt moment with Noah and Connor. I wonder what's ahead for Ruin and Nemisis as well. Great chapter.
3/8/2013 c19 Revamp
As our heroes press on my heart feels more and more. I like how thier fates are being pulled together and how everything is falling into place. With each chapter I read, the more involed and interested I bevme. I love all of the characters and thier stories. Great job.
As our heroes press on my heart feels more and more. I like how thier fates are being pulled together and how everything is falling into place. With each chapter I read, the more involed and interested I bevme. I love all of the characters and thier stories. Great job.
3/8/2013 c18 Revamp
Your Halloween special was funny especially when Connor was pumched in the face. I couldn't help but chuckle. It was a nice addition to the overall story.
It seems Micah will be reunited with Vetra. I think major characterization might be in order in future chapters. This is getting good.
Your Halloween special was funny especially when Connor was pumched in the face. I couldn't help but chuckle. It was a nice addition to the overall story.
It seems Micah will be reunited with Vetra. I think major characterization might be in order in future chapters. This is getting good.
3/8/2013 c17 Revamp
I take it some will live and some will die. It's all a matter of who. Poor Taras indeed. He's my favorite character. I wonder what the High Vircle has in store for our novelist.
I take it some will live and some will die. It's all a matter of who. Poor Taras indeed. He's my favorite character. I wonder what the High Vircle has in store for our novelist.
3/8/2013 c16 Revamp
I believe Meredith has good intentions, she just strikes me as an antihero. However, I wonder about Ruin's opinion on her, knowledge speaks as well. Also, I will live through this. Poor Micah. I hope he finds happiness.
I believe Meredith has good intentions, she just strikes me as an antihero. However, I wonder about Ruin's opinion on her, knowledge speaks as well. Also, I will live through this. Poor Micah. I hope he finds happiness.
3/8/2013 c15 Revamp
This is getting interesting, especially with Cronus and Nemisis being interwoven. Something tells me this will truly be a battle of the gods.
This is getting interesting, especially with Cronus and Nemisis being interwoven. Something tells me this will truly be a battle of the gods.
3/7/2013 c14 Revamp
This chapter was great and emotional. I'm glad Meredith didn't die. She and Taras are my favorite characters. I will definitely read more later. I am enjoying these chapters.
This chapter was great and emotional. I'm glad Meredith didn't die. She and Taras are my favorite characters. I will definitely read more later. I am enjoying these chapters.
3/7/2013 c13 Revamp
Another great chapter, with Ruin awake again, things are sure to get interesting and now Zhanna is pregant as well. The plot just keeps thickening with Hail's life.
Another great chapter, with Ruin awake again, things are sure to get interesting and now Zhanna is pregant as well. The plot just keeps thickening with Hail's life.
3/7/2013 c12 Revamp
This was a dramatic chapter. I wonder what will happen now that Zhanna knows Hail's secret.
This was a dramatic chapter. I wonder what will happen now that Zhanna knows Hail's secret.
3/7/2013 c11 Revamp
It's nice to have everyone together now, and the true story behind Ruin exposed. I like how things okayed out and the budding understanding between the priest and Taras. Also his inspiration for writing, and Hail's tumultuous relationship and consuming guilt.
It's nice to have everyone together now, and the true story behind Ruin exposed. I like how things okayed out and the budding understanding between the priest and Taras. Also his inspiration for writing, and Hail's tumultuous relationship and consuming guilt.
3/7/2013 c10 Revamp
I liked the way this turned out, especially the scene with Taras and Meredirh, as well as the father and the priest's resolve to seek the truth. There is nice development here.
I liked the way this turned out, especially the scene with Taras and Meredirh, as well as the father and the priest's resolve to seek the truth. There is nice development here.