8/24/2010 c11 cookiewolf
I like this girls attitude=) haha lucas is awesome;/ i want him=) aww thats so col i wanna go new york haha great chapter as usual
I like this girls attitude=) haha lucas is awesome;/ i want him=) aww thats so col i wanna go new york haha great chapter as usual
8/24/2010 c12 cookiewolf
omg that closet would be seriously heaven...i think i could live in your stroy=) haha i cant belive he can wal thorugh stuff i luaghed so ahrd when he said he would get stuck in between trees rofl =) awesome chapter
omg that closet would be seriously heaven...i think i could live in your stroy=) haha i cant belive he can wal thorugh stuff i luaghed so ahrd when he said he would get stuck in between trees rofl =) awesome chapter
8/24/2010 c13 cookiewolf
Wow, this is like one of my favourite stories on fp=) the plot is amazing=D
lol i love lucas
Wow, this is like one of my favourite stories on fp=) the plot is amazing=D
lol i love lucas
7/16/2010 c13 1DefineVintage
this story is great :) I enjoy the plot, a wolf on the run is always interesting :) can't wait for the next update :)
this story is great :) I enjoy the plot, a wolf on the run is always interesting :) can't wait for the next update :)
7/9/2010 c13 3Division Head
Haha. Wow. I love it! But I'm just wondering, why are the people STILL wearing victorian dresses and such when it seems like the 21st century? Just wondering. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!
WRITE ON!
-Division Head OUT!-
Haha. Wow. I love it! But I'm just wondering, why are the people STILL wearing victorian dresses and such when it seems like the 21st century? Just wondering. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!
WRITE ON!
-Division Head OUT!-
7/8/2010 c13 211cina24
Well that was interesting!
At least one person knows after thriteen chappies;P
Good job(:
Well that was interesting!
At least one person knows after thriteen chappies;P
Good job(:
7/8/2010 c13 XxSiennaxX
Loved the chapter, I'm glad someone knows and isn't going to turn her over to her father any time soon, but I do wish the Queen had asked/ will ask her reasons for 'running away'
I haven't really seen anyone use any masterchef recipes in literature yet, instead of actually making them themselves but I don't see any reason not to and it made me laugh a little bit when I read your comment on where the recipes had come from ;)
Can't wait for more, please update asap!
Loved the chapter, I'm glad someone knows and isn't going to turn her over to her father any time soon, but I do wish the Queen had asked/ will ask her reasons for 'running away'
I haven't really seen anyone use any masterchef recipes in literature yet, instead of actually making them themselves but I don't see any reason not to and it made me laugh a little bit when I read your comment on where the recipes had come from ;)
Can't wait for more, please update asap!
7/8/2010 c13 Da-zGreen
That's funny about the edible food. hehehe. Well can't wait what you have in store for us when you update.
That's funny about the edible food. hehehe. Well can't wait what you have in store for us when you update.
7/8/2010 c13 5Brandi Heir
wow, kya's life is literally twisting out of control. everyone wants something from her and everyone knows how to get it from her. blackmail sucks.
anywho, great chapter. though i would suggest reading your writing out loud. often sometime doesnt flow very well. i dont have time to find an example because i'm not really supposed to be on the computer but thats my advice to you. you dont have to use it.
anyway, update soon!
wow, kya's life is literally twisting out of control. everyone wants something from her and everyone knows how to get it from her. blackmail sucks.
anywho, great chapter. though i would suggest reading your writing out loud. often sometime doesnt flow very well. i dont have time to find an example because i'm not really supposed to be on the computer but thats my advice to you. you dont have to use it.
anyway, update soon!
7/8/2010 c13 freckled
I love your story, very interesting plot. Keep the chapters coming :)
I love your story, very interesting plot. Keep the chapters coming :)