
3/25/2014 c6 PoshKimberlee
Leon is dead a creep from the start . Why nobody that reviewed noticed that?
Leon is dead a creep from the start . Why nobody that reviewed noticed that?
6/3/2012 c21
5Crazytay
What a sweet story :) I loooveee Shawn. He's so cute. I loved the story and hope you continue.
On a more critical note, there were some grammar mistakes and sentence errors that threw me off but other than that two thumbs up.

What a sweet story :) I loooveee Shawn. He's so cute. I loved the story and hope you continue.
On a more critical note, there were some grammar mistakes and sentence errors that threw me off but other than that two thumbs up.
3/25/2012 c11
3foreigndelight
Loved all :) you're (and your friend?) talented as hell. This couldve been a tv show or sth. reaaly liked it chica ;)
now get up, be nice person, write a new one like this and enlighten my life..
Just kidding...
Hey, readers! If you are reading this reviews just to make sure the story is good or not, it is. and when you are finished, thank me ;D
and adore the author..

Loved all :) you're (and your friend?) talented as hell. This couldve been a tv show or sth. reaaly liked it chica ;)
now get up, be nice person, write a new one like this and enlighten my life..
Just kidding...
Hey, readers! If you are reading this reviews just to make sure the story is good or not, it is. and when you are finished, thank me ;D
and adore the author..
1/10/2012 c7
1Greatnezz
Love this chap. like all the others. Especially this one cuz my name is Raven too. Keep making stories(:

Love this chap. like all the others. Especially this one cuz my name is Raven too. Keep making stories(:
11/24/2011 c21 malta
great story well done can't wait for your next story.:)
great story well done can't wait for your next story.:)
9/24/2011 c21 Rosedreamer101
LOL i love this . i love the sexual chemistry thing they had going on ! so cute.
LOL i love this . i love the sexual chemistry thing they had going on ! so cute.
12/27/2010 c22
5RenaeJoy
oh my gosh! i love this book! it's so good! cannot wait to see how the other one goes! loved reading this, fully got adicted to it!
xx
E.M

oh my gosh! i love this book! it's so good! cannot wait to see how the other one goes! loved reading this, fully got adicted to it!
xx
E.M
7/19/2010 c21 Aradia Cloud
This was beautiful. Why the hell does it only have 90 sumfin reviews? I swear, people today don't know good work. Bunch of bloody idiots, they are.
Kudos
$*Aradia Cloud*$
This was beautiful. Why the hell does it only have 90 sumfin reviews? I swear, people today don't know good work. Bunch of bloody idiots, they are.
Kudos
$*Aradia Cloud*$
7/19/2010 c20 Aradia Cloud
Oh god. I honestly thought that Shawn was gonna die. I already had my "pissed off" speech ready for you.
Oh god. I honestly thought that Shawn was gonna die. I already had my "pissed off" speech ready for you.
7/19/2010 c11 Aradia Cloud
I was supposed to say this like... three chapter ago. I think that her mom is the other accomplice that the murderer has. I'm just spewing ideas here, so give me break if I'm wrong.
I was supposed to say this like... three chapter ago. I think that her mom is the other accomplice that the murderer has. I'm just spewing ideas here, so give me break if I'm wrong.
7/19/2010 c10 Aradia Cloud
They should just jump each other. Everyone (including myself) would be THAT much happier.
They should just jump each other. Everyone (including myself) would be THAT much happier.