for All That Glitters6/5/2010 c7 Ederra
I like where this is going. It's a bit of a cliche but I don't really mind. I thought that Liam forgave her too quickly, he didn't even get angry. He seemed more angry at the ball when she knocked the chicken out of his hand.
But anyway, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
-Innocence
I like where this is going. It's a bit of a cliche but I don't really mind. I thought that Liam forgave her too quickly, he didn't even get angry. He seemed more angry at the ball when she knocked the chicken out of his hand.
But anyway, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
-Innocence
6/5/2010 c1 
4chel bel
I love this so far! It's been a while since I've read anything on here, and I'm pleased I came across your story. So far, everything seems right with this chapter. The pacing is good, I like the characterization and the subtle introduction of new characters. It's very good. I look foward to continuing on! :)
4chel belI love this so far! It's been a while since I've read anything on here, and I'm pleased I came across your story. So far, everything seems right with this chapter. The pacing is good, I like the characterization and the subtle introduction of new characters. It's very good. I look foward to continuing on! :)
6/5/2010 c7 2Lunary Canary
...and then shes gonna sell it...:O or let it be Jamie's engagement ring! predictable
I wonder why Liam would like to date a theif...kinda pathetic for his social class :l what would his friends say...(if he had any, that is.)
2Lunary Canary...and then shes gonna sell it...:O or let it be Jamie's engagement ring! predictable
I wonder why Liam would like to date a theif...kinda pathetic for his social class :l what would his friends say...(if he had any, that is.)
6/5/2010 c7 applenica
i like this chapter. they are coming clean and start a fresh relationship. please update soon ^^
i like this chapter. they are coming clean and start a fresh relationship. please update soon ^^
6/5/2010 c7 25Kyllex
Aw. I liked it.
I'm sad that's it over so fast, but it was a good ending. I love Liam and Violet and the way it all wrapped up. Although I still feel like this could go on for so much longer, I'm happy with it. You did a really good job. (:
Thanks for sharing, I loved it!
25KyllexAw. I liked it.
I'm sad that's it over so fast, but it was a good ending. I love Liam and Violet and the way it all wrapped up. Although I still feel like this could go on for so much longer, I'm happy with it. You did a really good job. (:
Thanks for sharing, I loved it!
6/5/2010 c7 Mockingjay
Nice chapter. And har har. I knew Liam wasn't drunk. Oh and Alex Pettyfer, the guy you chose for Liam, is playing the main character in Beastly. Saw the trailer. 'Twas nice. I wonder if he has an accent.
Oh and is this done? If so, you know, if you want to make this longer by one chapter, you can do it by her brother proposing to Abby and such.
Nice chapter. And har har. I knew Liam wasn't drunk. Oh and Alex Pettyfer, the guy you chose for Liam, is playing the main character in Beastly. Saw the trailer. 'Twas nice. I wonder if he has an accent.
Oh and is this done? If so, you know, if you want to make this longer by one chapter, you can do it by her brother proposing to Abby and such.
6/5/2010 c7 1Complex Simplicities
You're right, it SHOULD be longer! I love this story! I'm sad to see it end so soon. I was hoping to see more between Liam and her relationship. But I understand that we all get a little busy some times. Thanks for a great story!
1Complex SimplicitiesYou're right, it SHOULD be longer! I love this story! I'm sad to see it end so soon. I was hoping to see more between Liam and her relationship. But I understand that we all get a little busy some times. Thanks for a great story!
6/5/2010 c7 2WinterInk24
I wonder how Liam will react when he finds out Violet is almost dirt poor. At least she's going to own up to things. Great writing. Update soon please
2WinterInk24I wonder how Liam will react when he finds out Violet is almost dirt poor. At least she's going to own up to things. Great writing. Update soon please
6/4/2010 c5 3HPRK08
Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod SHE GOT CAUGHT! : O
Awaiting an update with she will surely die without,
HPRK.
3HPRK08Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod Ohmygod SHE GOT CAUGHT! : O
Awaiting an update with she will surely die without,
HPRK.
6/2/2010 c5 99Dreamers-Requiem
Aw no. I was debating with myself all the way through that chapter if she should take it back or not - I wanted her to see Liam, but at the same time, I wanted her to sell the watch. Typical, she tries to do something nice and that happens! Anyway, overall I thought that was a really nice chapter, though I think you could have spent a bit more time on her own inner thoughts - her confliction over taking it back or not. And the phone call into work was written really well - very realistic.
99Dreamers-RequiemAw no. I was debating with myself all the way through that chapter if she should take it back or not - I wanted her to see Liam, but at the same time, I wanted her to sell the watch. Typical, she tries to do something nice and that happens! Anyway, overall I thought that was a really nice chapter, though I think you could have spent a bit more time on her own inner thoughts - her confliction over taking it back or not. And the phone call into work was written really well - very realistic.
6/2/2010 c6 cookiewolf
aww no. she was only trying to do good. oh gosh i wonder whats going to happen=(
aww no. she was only trying to do good. oh gosh i wonder whats going to happen=(
6/1/2010 c6 13VelvetyCheerio
One more chapter as in, one more and the story is through? O_o What? Hmm.
Well, this chapter certainly had me on the edge. I really liked Liam's character in this chapter for some reason. I don't know why, but he really had some substance to him and I liked it. Even if he only did have a few lines. :P
Man, I was sure Violet wouldn't be able to get in contact with him, though. Thank goodness. I wonder if she would have been able to bypass the guards if she had just worn the watch on her wrist rather than try and hide it... Hmm.
Good chapter. Can't wait for the next!
Velvet.
13VelvetyCheerioOne more chapter as in, one more and the story is through? O_o What? Hmm.
Well, this chapter certainly had me on the edge. I really liked Liam's character in this chapter for some reason. I don't know why, but he really had some substance to him and I liked it. Even if he only did have a few lines. :P
Man, I was sure Violet wouldn't be able to get in contact with him, though. Thank goodness. I wonder if she would have been able to bypass the guards if she had just worn the watch on her wrist rather than try and hide it... Hmm.
Good chapter. Can't wait for the next!
Velvet.
6/1/2010 c5 VelvetyCheerio
What? O: Why is she getting arrested? Is it because of the watch? O_o That's crazy...
No, would Violet really want to return the watch? I mean, they were going to use it to pay for a ring! How could she do that? Uh! This better not be what I think it's about. She's probably stolen countless of timeless and precious objects. Why now? Why now? xD
Argh! I can't believe she's getting arrested though. What a cliffhanger. Who's going to bail her out? What is her crime? Is the mayor going to know about this? O:
Excitement!
Velvet.
What? O: Why is she getting arrested? Is it because of the watch? O_o That's crazy...
No, would Violet really want to return the watch? I mean, they were going to use it to pay for a ring! How could she do that? Uh! This better not be what I think it's about. She's probably stolen countless of timeless and precious objects. Why now? Why now? xD
Argh! I can't believe she's getting arrested though. What a cliffhanger. Who's going to bail her out? What is her crime? Is the mayor going to know about this? O:
Excitement!
Velvet.