for All That Glitters6/1/2010 c6 
17shadowgirl618
I love where you're going with the story with her getting caught.
...but I wish she lied to Liam.
If she had lied, then he'd save her, and she'd feel guilty but she wouldn't know how to give back the watch or pay him back for bailing her out... she'd string him on...
Just an idea. :]
Have fun over the summer. Hope you update though. :D
17shadowgirl618I love where you're going with the story with her getting caught.
...but I wish she lied to Liam.
If she had lied, then he'd save her, and she'd feel guilty but she wouldn't know how to give back the watch or pay him back for bailing her out... she'd string him on...
Just an idea. :]
Have fun over the summer. Hope you update though. :D
5/31/2010 c6 MidKniight
Not what I expected, but that's a good thing. I don't think Liam will let it go, but I'm sure his solution will be very entertaining.
The part where she's arrested. Wouldn't they have asked her to put her hands behind her back and not above her head?
Not what I expected, but that's a good thing. I don't think Liam will let it go, but I'm sure his solution will be very entertaining.
The part where she's arrested. Wouldn't they have asked her to put her hands behind her back and not above her head?
5/30/2010 c6 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
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needs to be longer.. because i love it
please update soon
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needs to be longer.. because i love it
please update soon
5/30/2010 c6 2deny.me.not
That's right, Violet. Reflect on your actions! Anywayy, I wonder how the conversation between Liam and Violet is going to happen...probably interesting.
Looking forward to itt!
-dmn.
2deny.me.notThat's right, Violet. Reflect on your actions! Anywayy, I wonder how the conversation between Liam and Violet is going to happen...probably interesting.
Looking forward to itt!
-dmn.
5/30/2010 c6 25Kyllex
What? Only one more chapter? But...huh? D:
It seems like there is so much more to be done...so I'm curious to see how you wrap it up so fast. I was expecting this story to go on more quite a long time, so I'm suprised to hear that it's almost over already!
But I did like the chapter, although it was short. I hope Violet gets out of jail!
25KyllexWhat? Only one more chapter? But...huh? D:
It seems like there is so much more to be done...so I'm curious to see how you wrap it up so fast. I was expecting this story to go on more quite a long time, so I'm suprised to hear that it's almost over already!
But I did like the chapter, although it was short. I hope Violet gets out of jail!
5/30/2010 c6 2Skyterra
Only one more chapter?
If this were a longer story, I'd like to see more development of Liam and Violet's relationship (if it is supposed to be a romantic one). Like, once she gets out of jail, it'd be nice to see them actually, you know. Dating or something.
I guess I'm just kind of confused right now... but maybe things will be explained in the next chapter? :D
2SkyterraOnly one more chapter?
If this were a longer story, I'd like to see more development of Liam and Violet's relationship (if it is supposed to be a romantic one). Like, once she gets out of jail, it'd be nice to see them actually, you know. Dating or something.
I guess I'm just kind of confused right now... but maybe things will be explained in the next chapter? :D
5/30/2010 c6 Mockingjay
Oh one more chapter. Hm, I wonder if it's going to be long or not. Nevertheless, this was a good chapter.
Oh one more chapter. Hm, I wonder if it's going to be long or not. Nevertheless, this was a good chapter.
5/30/2010 c6 211cina24
What do you mean, 'one more chapter'?
Good chappie(:
Hmm, I wonder how the confrontation will go with Liam and Vi...
211cina24What do you mean, 'one more chapter'?
Good chappie(:
Hmm, I wonder how the confrontation will go with Liam and Vi...
5/30/2010 c6 4Cassadaga
only one more chapter until the story's done? noo...I want it to be longer! ahah. But seriously I hope it's not over soon :(
Still, I love it, and I can't see any issues with it at all. Thanks!
4Cassadagaonly one more chapter until the story's done? noo...I want it to be longer! ahah. But seriously I hope it's not over soon :(
Still, I love it, and I can't see any issues with it at all. Thanks!
5/30/2010 c6 3aby pwn u
ONE more chapter! NO tht's WAY too less :(
Oh well, All good things come to an end...
3aby pwn uONE more chapter! NO tht's WAY too less :(
Oh well, All good things come to an end...
5/30/2010 c5 12lianoid
Damn you’ve been getting a lot of reviews since I’ve last visited this story! It’s catching like wild fire and I totally can see why.
Oh shit. Fantastic ending. I felt like this chapter moved a little too quickly though, and I think you could have drawn out her decision a bit more. I mean, it was rather sudden, really. I know she feels bad because his dad gave him the watch, and she’s sad because she doesn’t have anything from her dad, but I think it would have been wise to develop that a bit more; instead of her abruptly coming to the conclusion that the watch must be returned.
Either way, good chapter. Look forward to reading more soon.
12lianoidDamn you’ve been getting a lot of reviews since I’ve last visited this story! It’s catching like wild fire and I totally can see why.
Oh shit. Fantastic ending. I felt like this chapter moved a little too quickly though, and I think you could have drawn out her decision a bit more. I mean, it was rather sudden, really. I know she feels bad because his dad gave him the watch, and she’s sad because she doesn’t have anything from her dad, but I think it would have been wise to develop that a bit more; instead of her abruptly coming to the conclusion that the watch must be returned.
Either way, good chapter. Look forward to reading more soon.
5/29/2010 c5 2deny.me.not
I can't even express how stupid I think Vi is for what she did at the end of this chapter. But it must be done, I guess.
On the other hand, I think I have a crush on Teddy, hahahaa.
Update soon. :)
-dmn.
2deny.me.notI can't even express how stupid I think Vi is for what she did at the end of this chapter. But it must be done, I guess.
On the other hand, I think I have a crush on Teddy, hahahaa.
Update soon. :)
-dmn.