for Happily Ever After5/16/2011 c1 
3xinnie
That was really good! when I read "modern version of cinderella", i was like, OH.
But this really surpassed my expectations! well done :)
it was a little too short though ): (i hate it when stories come to an end)
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3xinnieThat was really good! when I read "modern version of cinderella", i was like, OH.
But this really surpassed my expectations! well done :)
it was a little too short though ): (i hate it when stories come to an end)
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5/31/2010 c1 xEchoxInfernox
it is short but ur characters are awesome and very love-able:). i liked it alot, woznt 2 sweet which woz nice. meaning i didnt feel sick frm a sugar overload lol. thanku=D
it is short but ur characters are awesome and very love-able:). i liked it alot, woznt 2 sweet which woz nice. meaning i didnt feel sick frm a sugar overload lol. thanku=D
4/9/2010 c1 Dead Deactivated
who wouldnt want to review :P It was cute! But you could make this into a longer story which would be cool :) Id totally read it
who wouldnt want to review :P It was cute! But you could make this into a longer story which would be cool :) Id totally read it
4/6/2010 c1 1MintCcIceCream
Aww! This is cute! It all kind of went in a blur, but I still really liked it! Good luck writing and with life and everything! LOVE THE STORY! UPDATE SOON!
Love,
MintCcIceCream ♥
1MintCcIceCreamAww! This is cute! It all kind of went in a blur, but I still really liked it! Good luck writing and with life and everything! LOVE THE STORY! UPDATE SOON!
Love,
MintCcIceCream ♥
4/2/2010 c1 Raspberries
hmm...awfully cheesy but it made me smile
hmm...awfully cheesy but it made me smile