for Puppeteer1/26/2014 c10 juweyriya
please write more
please write more
2/16/2013 c10 Guest
ahh! don't stop now!
this story is amaizing and u just had to leave it off at a cliffie didnt u? :P
but seriously, i love the plot. the intrigue, the suspense, the budding romance soon to come...
i love nico, he's adorable! and u did an awesome job with this whole story plz plz dont abandon it! :(
ahh! don't stop now!
this story is amaizing and u just had to leave it off at a cliffie didnt u? :P
but seriously, i love the plot. the intrigue, the suspense, the budding romance soon to come...
i love nico, he's adorable! and u did an awesome job with this whole story plz plz dont abandon it! :(
7/2/2011 c9 
3Kyre Crow
This is certainly unique. The conversation with Kera, the folder; finally, a prepared hero. You know how sick I am of heroes who go into stuff completely unprepared and manage to come out victorious? I have to admit that the conversation itself was a little hard to follow, but I did understand all of it. I'm liking Kera more and more.
Again, I noticed some typos, but again, I didn't really notice any other errors. I liked Kera's voice, it really showed through with her writing. Now I'm wondering if all puppets have similar voices? Though she feels no pain, and talks the way she does, I can distinguish her personality. Good job with that. I still can't wait for Nico to get back!
3Kyre CrowThis is certainly unique. The conversation with Kera, the folder; finally, a prepared hero. You know how sick I am of heroes who go into stuff completely unprepared and manage to come out victorious? I have to admit that the conversation itself was a little hard to follow, but I did understand all of it. I'm liking Kera more and more.
Again, I noticed some typos, but again, I didn't really notice any other errors. I liked Kera's voice, it really showed through with her writing. Now I'm wondering if all puppets have similar voices? Though she feels no pain, and talks the way she does, I can distinguish her personality. Good job with that. I still can't wait for Nico to get back!
7/2/2011 c8 Kyre Crow
Hello, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time. Firstly, I like the idea of making it slash, but mildly. I'll be sure to keep reading, and I'll really try to keep up with your updates.
I really like your dialogue; it all flows along nicely, and it's easy to concentrate on. There's a lot of it, but it definitely seems to help further the plot.
You really accomplished a lot in this chapter. I also liked that Mariane got a lot of screen time; she's an interesting character. I can't wait till Nico comes back. He's by far the most intriguing character, and I'd love to find out more about him. You know, I have a character who sort of reminds me of Nico. Oops.
There were a couple of typos with spelling, but those were the only errors I noticed. You did a good job with Orion's interaction with Kera, even though she can't speak. I actually want to find out more about her, as well. Good luck with future chapters and I'm off to read the next.
Hello, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time. Firstly, I like the idea of making it slash, but mildly. I'll be sure to keep reading, and I'll really try to keep up with your updates.
I really like your dialogue; it all flows along nicely, and it's easy to concentrate on. There's a lot of it, but it definitely seems to help further the plot.
You really accomplished a lot in this chapter. I also liked that Mariane got a lot of screen time; she's an interesting character. I can't wait till Nico comes back. He's by far the most intriguing character, and I'd love to find out more about him. You know, I have a character who sort of reminds me of Nico. Oops.
There were a couple of typos with spelling, but those were the only errors I noticed. You did a good job with Orion's interaction with Kera, even though she can't speak. I actually want to find out more about her, as well. Good luck with future chapters and I'm off to read the next.
6/27/2011 c10 1Scorned
Swagnificant job you're doing, just pimptastic. I'd really like to get more information about this mother, and I suppose I'd like to know a bit more about the father as well. And whenever I read this...It's still hard to picture Orion. Maybe just a bit of detail so we can imagine his appearance. :)
1ScornedSwagnificant job you're doing, just pimptastic. I'd really like to get more information about this mother, and I suppose I'd like to know a bit more about the father as well. And whenever I read this...It's still hard to picture Orion. Maybe just a bit of detail so we can imagine his appearance. :)
6/27/2011 c9 Scorned
The Color Purple...It fits :)
This all seems pretty well planned out, and it's rarely choppy.
The Color Purple...It fits :)
This all seems pretty well planned out, and it's rarely choppy.
6/27/2011 c8 Scorned
Woot for the /, I suppose. I really like Kera, and I'm starting to wonder about that flute bit in the last chapter (Or the chapter before, I forget.) Anyway, :)
Woot for the /, I suppose. I really like Kera, and I'm starting to wonder about that flute bit in the last chapter (Or the chapter before, I forget.) Anyway, :)
6/27/2011 c7 Scorned
Both women were beaming at their aster.
Pretty sure you meant master. Random typo aside, I'm waiting for the suspense, or the plot or whatever, to start sidling in. I'm really curious to see where this story's going.
Both women were beaming at their aster.
Pretty sure you meant master. Random typo aside, I'm waiting for the suspense, or the plot or whatever, to start sidling in. I'm really curious to see where this story's going.
6/27/2011 c6 Scorned
Somehow, when I read the title to this chapter, I imagined that test where one person falls backwards into another person's arms...Awkward. Anyway, WOOT WOOT :)
Somehow, when I read the title to this chapter, I imagined that test where one person falls backwards into another person's arms...Awkward. Anyway, WOOT WOOT :)
6/27/2011 c5 Scorned
Woot, love this story :) It deserves a lot more love. Uhm...If I could ask for one thing, it would be a bit more in the character description department. I mean, besides hair color, and eyes, I can't get a good picture of the characters in my head at all.
Woot, love this story :) It deserves a lot more love. Uhm...If I could ask for one thing, it would be a bit more in the character description department. I mean, besides hair color, and eyes, I can't get a good picture of the characters in my head at all.
6/18/2011 c9 Dark Day
Great story line and good character development, really helps build up the mental picture of Orion & Nico. Can't wait to find out what Nico's purpose is...
Great story line and good character development, really helps build up the mental picture of Orion & Nico. Can't wait to find out what Nico's purpose is...
5/9/2011 c8 Round About Parker
This is really interesting so far. I'm a big fan of slash, so I'm glad for the change (also wouldn't have found this otherwise). I can't wait to see where this is headed!
This is really interesting so far. I'm a big fan of slash, so I'm glad for the change (also wouldn't have found this otherwise). I can't wait to see where this is headed!
11/26/2010 c7 3Kyre Crow
Another great chapter. I can see this Nico's dancing and feeling mother thing leading into something in the future of the story (and I wasn't even looking for it, this time). I like the last section, you managed not to make it boring even though it was pretty much just repeating things that happened above, good job. No problem that you took so long to update, I've waited much longer. I'm half asleep now so I won't leave a long review, keep writing.
3Kyre CrowAnother great chapter. I can see this Nico's dancing and feeling mother thing leading into something in the future of the story (and I wasn't even looking for it, this time). I like the last section, you managed not to make it boring even though it was pretty much just repeating things that happened above, good job. No problem that you took so long to update, I've waited much longer. I'm half asleep now so I won't leave a long review, keep writing.
9/8/2010 c6 Kyre Crow
I liked this chapter a lot. The chapter name itself was one of those titles that just kind of pulls us in. I'm liking Nico more and more. I also liked how you introduced the king more, and Orion's little sister. I hope to see them more later in the story. Good job!
I liked this chapter a lot. The chapter name itself was one of those titles that just kind of pulls us in. I'm liking Nico more and more. I also liked how you introduced the king more, and Orion's little sister. I hope to see them more later in the story. Good job!
6/12/2010 c5 Kyre Crow
Aw, the next chapter's not up?
I really like this story, though. Nico is still a vague character, even in a chapter from his perspective. I would like to know more about his history... at least, his history as a Puppeteer... And about Kera, 'cause I'm imagining stuff. Please update soon?
Aw, the next chapter's not up?
I really like this story, though. Nico is still a vague character, even in a chapter from his perspective. I would like to know more about his history... at least, his history as a Puppeteer... And about Kera, 'cause I'm imagining stuff. Please update soon?