for Number Boy & Midnight Girl6/25/2010 c1 
2cheveux roux
You have a truly exquisite writing style. It's painful to read this story of (what I assume to be) cheating, but it's beautifully, beautifully written. It's an interesting take on the relationship and falling for the other woman, but not being able to have her. The repeated lines of "take your top off and get on your knees" is killer and painful not only because it's so crude and hurts the girl, but because the reader can tell it's killing the guy, too.
Bravo.
2cheveux rouxYou have a truly exquisite writing style. It's painful to read this story of (what I assume to be) cheating, but it's beautifully, beautifully written. It's an interesting take on the relationship and falling for the other woman, but not being able to have her. The repeated lines of "take your top off and get on your knees" is killer and painful not only because it's so crude and hurts the girl, but because the reader can tell it's killing the guy, too.
Bravo.