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4/3/2010 c1 5Connor Mack
What a great piece! I liked how you brought several themes together to make a unique experience, and made this spiritual story spiritual without labeling any single religion into it. The idea of out of body experiences to travel the universe is an amazing idea. You also did a nice job of creating the narrator's voice, making him speak in a different yet realistic manner certainly kept my attention.

I really couldn't find anything wrong with this piece. Great work! I'm surprised that there aren't more reviews here.

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