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1/3/2011 c1 Tammie
HOT. Good job! :D
10/3/2010 c1 6The-Great-Wish-Sama
*drools slightly* That was hot.
9/8/2010 c1 curiouseditor
just a few pointers. you have them doing things that would require them to hold their breath under water. they are still in the hot tub, so Logan would have to hold his breath in order to lick Dylan's hips and chest. overall a good story, though you can't really tell if they have had sex before or if this is their first time. i hope to see more of your writing down the line.

good luck!
4/9/2010 c1 Tyler
Its actually cum and cumming, besides that, its perfect.

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