for New Life7/14/2010 c7 
29Unmasked identity
Love it! Hey, I like the song Your gonna go far kid, know any other good song by them? Keep writing, love!
29Unmasked identityLove it! Hey, I like the song Your gonna go far kid, know any other good song by them? Keep writing, love!
7/12/2010 c6 1AshTempest
Thanks for explaining it to me :) and I'm glad that you didn't loose intrest. Other than that this seems quiet intresting, the fact that she was rapped. I hope as the story continues you will tell us more about her past and relationship with Matt.
Thanks again and hope you do write more!
~Ash
1AshTempestThanks for explaining it to me :) and I'm glad that you didn't loose intrest. Other than that this seems quiet intresting, the fact that she was rapped. I hope as the story continues you will tell us more about her past and relationship with Matt.
Thanks again and hope you do write more!
~Ash
7/11/2010 c5 AshTempest
no thank you. :) thanks again for uploading this.
I don't think kelsey is crazy, I thnk she's hyper.
Being crazy is simmilar to being Irrational and making illigocal decisions, so what you wrote there is her being completely hyper. I guess you lost interest in the story since you only wrote a paragraph, so I understand.
If you still wan to upload , then thats cool.
But if you did loose intrest then don't try. I know how it feels when you lost intrest in writting something but then you still had to write it.
P.S:
"but like what?" got me cunfused ohnestly.
no thank you. :) thanks again for uploading this.
I don't think kelsey is crazy, I thnk she's hyper.
Being crazy is simmilar to being Irrational and making illigocal decisions, so what you wrote there is her being completely hyper. I guess you lost interest in the story since you only wrote a paragraph, so I understand.
If you still wan to upload , then thats cool.
But if you did loose intrest then don't try. I know how it feels when you lost intrest in writting something but then you still had to write it.
P.S:
"but like what?" got me cunfused ohnestly.
7/7/2010 c5 29Unmasked identity
Hahaha.. That sounds just like you.. I love/miss you too, love! ttyl ♥ Haha, remember the British talking thing!
29Unmasked identityHahaha.. That sounds just like you.. I love/miss you too, love! ttyl ♥ Haha, remember the British talking thing!
5/4/2010 c1 60FelleLLoyd
I like the storyline, & the characters. However, there's a little too much dialogue in the story. Perhaps you could use more descriptions? Nonetheless, I think this has a lot of potential.
60FelleLLoydI like the storyline, & the characters. However, there's a little too much dialogue in the story. Perhaps you could use more descriptions? Nonetheless, I think this has a lot of potential.