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9amgoosehjonk
wonderfully dark and excellently written. this is post-apocalyptic horror at its finest.
9amgoosehjonkwonderfully dark and excellently written. this is post-apocalyptic horror at its finest.
11/5/2014 c1 Hello
What a disturbing twist on democracy and human nature – and superbly well-written too. Well done.
What a disturbing twist on democracy and human nature – and superbly well-written too. Well done.
7/9/2014 c1 REN4488X
It's amazing how that child could be so bold and take power over all of those adults. I like how defiant the main character was after all that had happened to everyone else. You did a really good job.
It's amazing how that child could be so bold and take power over all of those adults. I like how defiant the main character was after all that had happened to everyone else. You did a really good job.
10/9/2013 c1 bluesman735
Cool.
I found this story quite unique and very entertaining.
It would make a very good horror story for younger people. A good scare for children.
Cool.
I found this story quite unique and very entertaining.
It would make a very good horror story for younger people. A good scare for children.
5/20/2012 c1 YoungBloodSpillsTonight
wow, that was refreshingly orginial :) This story would make a creepy movie, and it would be cool if you wrote more about it. Like a rebellion.
wow, that was refreshingly orginial :) This story would make a creepy movie, and it would be cool if you wrote more about it. Like a rebellion.
12/9/2010 c1 18thesoaringskies
Cool... Go Britney! And Kevin. Kevin is really... Words cannot describe the intrigue spurred on by this creature. Great writing.
18thesoaringskiesCool... Go Britney! And Kevin. Kevin is really... Words cannot describe the intrigue spurred on by this creature. Great writing.
12/7/2010 c1 4mercedesamber
Wow. I love this, it reminds me of something I read ages ago, but I can't remember. I loved that, and I love this. Great!
4mercedesamberWow. I love this, it reminds me of something I read ages ago, but I can't remember. I loved that, and I love this. Great!
8/21/2010 c1 PatheticOne2010
After reading this whole excerpt, i feel that this was absolutely brilliant. Although it's dark the story has a sort of vibrant radiance to it. Brittney is the perfect age for people to expect as naive. The main character, although I'm not sure of his name, is flawless. The man has the right type of mindset to be sort of optimistic in the current situation. I was hopin there was more when i got to the end.
After reading this whole excerpt, i feel that this was absolutely brilliant. Although it's dark the story has a sort of vibrant radiance to it. Brittney is the perfect age for people to expect as naive. The main character, although I'm not sure of his name, is flawless. The man has the right type of mindset to be sort of optimistic in the current situation. I was hopin there was more when i got to the end.
6/26/2010 c1 emma johnson
I thourouhly enjoyed this story. Is it just a short story or part of a novel? The idea is fresh and original, the writing excellent, and beautifully descriptive. Definatley worth exploring further as a novel if you have'nt already.
I thourouhly enjoyed this story. Is it just a short story or part of a novel? The idea is fresh and original, the writing excellent, and beautifully descriptive. Definatley worth exploring further as a novel if you have'nt already.