for Journal Of The Ruins2/27/2011 c1 
1Splash Where Tear Drops
Instead of founded, it's found and always put an before a word that starts with a vowel. EG. an apple, an orange, and an ice cream chased me down the street.
This is good, though I don't like zombies and I probably won't read this again.
Happy writing!
Splash
1Splash Where Tear DropsInstead of founded, it's found and always put an before a word that starts with a vowel. EG. an apple, an orange, and an ice cream chased me down the street.
This is good, though I don't like zombies and I probably won't read this again.
Happy writing!
Splash
11/15/2010 c1 18Snowflakes Are Drifting
It's sick, LOL. I take it back. No warning, it's really not that bad. Please review. Thanks! ^.^
18Snowflakes Are DriftingIt's sick, LOL. I take it back. No warning, it's really not that bad. Please review. Thanks! ^.^