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4/10/2010 c1 name redacted
Interesting structure and flow, with the opening and closing like a prayer, and some of occasional rhymes thrown into the middle. The message of the poem and the means in which it is delivered, with a strong emotional connection, established by effective word choice, has a lot of impact.

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