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5/2/2010 c1 10hayella
Honestly it has potential. In my opinion, and I hope you don't mind, you could have made it more kiddo type since it's in the kids section. I don't believe the term bastars fit in children at the age of six and seven. Just what I thought though. :)

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4/24/2010 c1 Y-chan
Great, but I want to se longer stories from you, I've seen you on and you really should write your original stories over here.
4/18/2010 c1 Little Me
It's simple. I like it.
4/11/2010 c1 Mushy-Mushy-Mush
It's a cute story, though short. I think you can write longer stories than this, with both serious and/or humour filled content. I've read one of your stories on - Exchanging a Dream For Reality - which I loved, but I don't have an account here, so I can't really leave a signed review. Oh well . . . I liked it, and I want to see more stories from you, and longer ones.

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