
4/14/2010 c1
12that dreamers often lie
This is amazing. I love how your emotions can be felt so strongly without the use of any "feeling words". And my favorite line, "or if my lungs have forgotten I'm alive."

This is amazing. I love how your emotions can be felt so strongly without the use of any "feeling words". And my favorite line, "or if my lungs have forgotten I'm alive."
4/11/2010 c1
8sealednectar
Wow. Very well written. I liked the ideas you portrayed in this poem. Great work!:)

Wow. Very well written. I liked the ideas you portrayed in this poem. Great work!:)
4/11/2010 c1
1zescorpiobitch
i really enjoyed reading ur poem, there is so many different emotions being show,like feeling alone with the line "i feel like an alien in this human world" but it also gives the idea of a person so different from the rest.

i really enjoyed reading ur poem, there is so many different emotions being show,like feeling alone with the line "i feel like an alien in this human world" but it also gives the idea of a person so different from the rest.