for Phantom Heart Syndrome7/14/2010 c6 
30RockFan
I just don't understand why this story doesn't have more reviews - it's great and very original. Your characters are exceptionally well-written and your grammar is fantastic.
I look forward to the next chapter.
30RockFanI just don't understand why this story doesn't have more reviews - it's great and very original. Your characters are exceptionally well-written and your grammar is fantastic.
I look forward to the next chapter.
7/14/2010 c1 4sunnybunny17
It's a really good beginning. I like it(: I have a feeling I'm going to get to love Owen:D
4sunnybunny17It's a really good beginning. I like it(: I have a feeling I'm going to get to love Owen:D
7/11/2010 c5 Roman Candles
Great story. I love the intricate characters. Quinn seems to have a lot of problems, but so does Owen. Please update soon!
Great story. I love the intricate characters. Quinn seems to have a lot of problems, but so does Owen. Please update soon!
5/30/2010 c5 30RockFan
Sorry it has taken me so long to review - I read both chapters last week and didn't send a review. But I love this story. I love how original it is and I love your characters (especially Owen).
Hope you're able to post more soon.
30RockFanSorry it has taken me so long to review - I read both chapters last week and didn't send a review. But I love this story. I love how original it is and I love your characters (especially Owen).
Hope you're able to post more soon.
5/30/2010 c4 RockFan
Your characters are always so real that I usually compare them with people I know. And I love all their faults and little quirks.
Thanks for a great story.
Your characters are always so real that I usually compare them with people I know. And I love all their faults and little quirks.
Thanks for a great story.
5/22/2010 c5 8sealednectar
I liked this (longer) chapter:) Nice work! Owen is definitely my fave.
In the previous chapter, I wish we'd seen more of Teddy, just to learn more about him, seeing as he is the psychiatrist/lover/abuser.
Fave lines:
"Is he a convict? Is he a she? Is he your cousin? Is he-"
"You're probably not as dumb as blonde jokes would have you believe."
"You must be into some freaky stuff with a bruise that size. Lucky guy."
Hahaha, yes all Owen's lines:D
Keep writing!
8sealednectarI liked this (longer) chapter:) Nice work! Owen is definitely my fave.
In the previous chapter, I wish we'd seen more of Teddy, just to learn more about him, seeing as he is the psychiatrist/lover/abuser.
Fave lines:
"Is he a convict? Is he a she? Is he your cousin? Is he-"
"You're probably not as dumb as blonde jokes would have you believe."
"You must be into some freaky stuff with a bruise that size. Lucky guy."
Hahaha, yes all Owen's lines:D
Keep writing!
5/20/2010 c4 7Vaudeville
This is very, very well done so far and amazingly intriguing. You're only four chapters in and I feel like this could be one my favourite stories on here. I'm very excited for the next, and probably all, update(s).
7VaudevilleThis is very, very well done so far and amazingly intriguing. You're only four chapters in and I feel like this could be one my favourite stories on here. I'm very excited for the next, and probably all, update(s).
5/20/2010 c4 77H. C. Kitrel
Wonderful story! It's incredibly original with the storyline and the characters. I can't wait to read more. I'm happy your chapters are lengthy as well, it's more fun to read that way.
If you ever have time you might like my story on here called The Way It Is. Check my profile for the link. If you ever have a chance to read it, please do review it, it's greatly appreciated.
Again, wonderful job and I cant wait to read more!
Thanks!
77H. C. KitrelWonderful story! It's incredibly original with the storyline and the characters. I can't wait to read more. I'm happy your chapters are lengthy as well, it's more fun to read that way.
If you ever have time you might like my story on here called The Way It Is. Check my profile for the link. If you ever have a chance to read it, please do review it, it's greatly appreciated.
Again, wonderful job and I cant wait to read more!
Thanks!
5/12/2010 c3 3Venus Smurf1
Hm...I sort of hate Owen, but in a good way. He irritates me, and I would have slapped him and left if I'd been in her shoes, but at the same time, they're an interesting couple. Very different, and the banter is entertaining, even if it isn't flirty. Well done.
3Venus Smurf1Hm...I sort of hate Owen, but in a good way. He irritates me, and I would have slapped him and left if I'd been in her shoes, but at the same time, they're an interesting couple. Very different, and the banter is entertaining, even if it isn't flirty. Well done.
5/10/2010 c3 RockFan
I really like this story. The characters are unique which is a refreshing change and it makes me anxious for the next chapter. Hope you update again soon.
I really like this story. The characters are unique which is a refreshing change and it makes me anxious for the next chapter. Hope you update again soon.
4/27/2010 c2 3Venus Smurf1
Yay! Another update! I was genuinely excited when I got the email alert.
And it was a very good chapter. I love that she called him at one in the morning. So funny! And it kind of shows that he's not the only one with issues. Very well done. Can't wait for more!
3Venus Smurf1Yay! Another update! I was genuinely excited when I got the email alert.
And it was a very good chapter. I love that she called him at one in the morning. So funny! And it kind of shows that he's not the only one with issues. Very well done. Can't wait for more!
4/27/2010 c2 30RockFan
I don't like Teddy much and he hasn't even uttered a word (maybe one word). This is a great story. I love your writing style and your characters. Update again soon.
30RockFanI don't like Teddy much and he hasn't even uttered a word (maybe one word). This is a great story. I love your writing style and your characters. Update again soon.
4/21/2010 c1 RockFan
I liked it - especially Owen's character. I've yet to run across a one-limbed main character. It's very original and originality is hard to find on FP. I'm interested to see what happens next. I hope you update again soon.
I liked it - especially Owen's character. I've yet to run across a one-limbed main character. It's very original and originality is hard to find on FP. I'm interested to see what happens next. I hope you update again soon.