for The Great Outdoors4/12/2010 c1 
38Lissa Wyga
charming poem. I enjoyed your use of rhyme. I am trying to move away from rhyme myself, but I always find it gives poems (and your poem) a great flow.
38Lissa Wygacharming poem. I enjoyed your use of rhyme. I am trying to move away from rhyme myself, but I always find it gives poems (and your poem) a great flow.