for Petrol, Money and Mr Perfect1/16/2011 c5 applenica
oh please ...update soon. i want to know about daniel ^^. he seems so nice and mysterius. why he is so interesting to monica?
oh please ...update soon. i want to know about daniel ^^. he seems so nice and mysterius. why he is so interesting to monica?
6/20/2010 c4 
2The Oddest Of Them All
oh monica has a boyfriend. liking this story very much. please update soon.
2The Oddest Of Them Alloh monica has a boyfriend. liking this story very much. please update soon.
6/20/2010 c4 4Garneau
Hey,
loving the story.
Poor Mon, being set up by her parents. I can't wait to see how her crazy plan unfolds.
The dialogue is very good and well suited for your style of writing.
I'm confused now, Austen or Daniel? I don't know which I like better. I can't wait to see what happens next,
Garneau.
4GarneauHey,
loving the story.
Poor Mon, being set up by her parents. I can't wait to see how her crazy plan unfolds.
The dialogue is very good and well suited for your style of writing.
I'm confused now, Austen or Daniel? I don't know which I like better. I can't wait to see what happens next,
Garneau.
5/15/2010 c3 applenica
hi! i'm your new reader. i like your story. it's interesting that some mysterius guy pay attention to some girl that didnt realized him. please update soon ^^
hi! i'm your new reader. i like your story. it's interesting that some mysterius guy pay attention to some girl that didnt realized him. please update soon ^^
5/15/2010 c3 theloverslife
Ooh! :) I like it. Update soon!
It's a little choppy here and there, and (not to sound rude at all!) it reads as kind of amateur work. But I love the storyline! And woot woot! Go Ashley! That's something I'd do ;)
PS. You should check out my story, Picture Perfect..
Ooh! :) I like it. Update soon!
It's a little choppy here and there, and (not to sound rude at all!) it reads as kind of amateur work. But I love the storyline! And woot woot! Go Ashley! That's something I'd do ;)
PS. You should check out my story, Picture Perfect..
5/15/2010 c3 11R. Tist
Family drama? Already? ~NICE~ Not usually into this much drama, but this is so addicting! Augh, and now I feel the powerful urge to kick this Vince-guy's behind. He ruined a perfect fluff oppurtunity! -Curses!
Not much to say since there is yet to be some fluff for me to squeal about, but update soon, I hope! The drama of it all urges me to read on. :"3
-The Random Artist
11R. TistFamily drama? Already? ~NICE~ Not usually into this much drama, but this is so addicting! Augh, and now I feel the powerful urge to kick this Vince-guy's behind. He ruined a perfect fluff oppurtunity! -Curses!
Not much to say since there is yet to be some fluff for me to squeal about, but update soon, I hope! The drama of it all urges me to read on. :"3
-The Random Artist
5/12/2010 c2 E
You have a good start and I cannot wait to read more! I'm a wee bit curious about what Daniel actually does..?
Keep at it!
You have a good start and I cannot wait to read more! I'm a wee bit curious about what Daniel actually does..?
Keep at it!
5/12/2010 c2 1TheFreeSky
I really like the way this is going ^^ It's my kind of story, so I'll be keeping an eye out for updates!
There could be a little more detail in places but I think you've got a nice handle on it.
Look forward to reading more!
1TheFreeSkyI really like the way this is going ^^ It's my kind of story, so I'll be keeping an eye out for updates!
There could be a little more detail in places but I think you've got a nice handle on it.
Look forward to reading more!
5/12/2010 c2 hyukiefever
nice plot ! interested interested.. daniel seems.. perfect? kekeke.. update soon ! ^^
nice plot ! interested interested.. daniel seems.. perfect? kekeke.. update soon ! ^^