for Devils Daughter9/1/2010 c1 Jjgurl
Its a really good story.
I would LOVE to read more!
Please keep on writing cus ur awesome!
Its a really good story.
I would LOVE to read more!
Please keep on writing cus ur awesome!
8/21/2010 c12 Istalri
Wow, this is an excellent story! You're definitely one of the best writers I've read so far on this site! I can't wait to see how the story develops further :D
Wow, this is an excellent story! You're definitely one of the best writers I've read so far on this site! I can't wait to see how the story develops further :D
6/3/2010 c10 
4Inwe Taralom
Hahaha love the witches, they were great, ugly but great. This was excellent and I enjoyed reading it very much. Continue on so I can read more please lol
4Inwe TaralomHahaha love the witches, they were great, ugly but great. This was excellent and I enjoyed reading it very much. Continue on so I can read more please lol
5/16/2010 c9 4Inwe Taralom
lol that was a good chapter. I like this story very much. Can't wait to read more.
4Inwe Taralomlol that was a good chapter. I like this story very much. Can't wait to read more.
5/15/2010 c2 1Spiritrunner89
Very intresting story, I love that you center the paragraphs on the page, it actually makes it easier to read and not many authors do that. It is nicly written and you put good imagination in it, good job!
1Spiritrunner89Very intresting story, I love that you center the paragraphs on the page, it actually makes it easier to read and not many authors do that. It is nicly written and you put good imagination in it, good job!
5/10/2010 c8 Emma2Ann12
Hm, this is pretty interesting so far! I like it! Keep up the good work and please hurry with the next one!
later
Em
Hm, this is pretty interesting so far! I like it! Keep up the good work and please hurry with the next one!
later
Em
4/30/2010 c7 1Rae Kitano
A very intriguing story.
A few spelling errors but that happens.
I have been left with the need to know more, that's a great thing to achieve in a story.
Well done.
1Rae KitanoA very intriguing story.
A few spelling errors but that happens.
I have been left with the need to know more, that's a great thing to achieve in a story.
Well done.
4/21/2010 c5 4Inwe Taralom
I find your story very interesting. Your writing style is unique and you have a wonderful idea going. I do enjoy reading this. I hope you will continue and update it soon. Those others that have given advice do have points but remember to just write how you are comfortable. I find stories most enjoyable when every little thing isn't perfect. My stories never are perfect and taking longer to develop then yours because that is how i'm comfotable writing. So continue with this as you see best. I am enjoying it greatly and hope you do finish it on here. It's sad when a story is left infinished.
4Inwe TaralomI find your story very interesting. Your writing style is unique and you have a wonderful idea going. I do enjoy reading this. I hope you will continue and update it soon. Those others that have given advice do have points but remember to just write how you are comfortable. I find stories most enjoyable when every little thing isn't perfect. My stories never are perfect and taking longer to develop then yours because that is how i'm comfotable writing. So continue with this as you see best. I am enjoying it greatly and hope you do finish it on here. It's sad when a story is left infinished.