for A Dramatic Monologue9/28/2012 c1 
1D.C. Anilai
I must say: very interesting.
I found this while looking for monologues a friend of mine could use in forensics (speech and debate: college level) and I like this very much. I understand it as a one shot- just a short snippet into your life, but it still gives the impression of being something more, something more amazing than it is already.
I thank you for having this on here, even if I don't normally come over to fiction press to read.
1D.C. AnilaiI must say: very interesting.
I found this while looking for monologues a friend of mine could use in forensics (speech and debate: college level) and I like this very much. I understand it as a one shot- just a short snippet into your life, but it still gives the impression of being something more, something more amazing than it is already.
I thank you for having this on here, even if I don't normally come over to fiction press to read.
6/23/2011 c1 Erin Rosamond Black
Magnificently written. The closing line was perfection. I have to say it - I'm envious of your talent, and your gift with omelet metaphors, and I think this was perfectly executed, funny and original. Very well done, mon ami. :) And yes, the smiley is absolutely necessary. Aren't they always? Ah, the world would be a poorer place without smilies. I'm going to stop talking now before your brain explodes. Pip pip.
Magnificently written. The closing line was perfection. I have to say it - I'm envious of your talent, and your gift with omelet metaphors, and I think this was perfectly executed, funny and original. Very well done, mon ami. :) And yes, the smiley is absolutely necessary. Aren't they always? Ah, the world would be a poorer place without smilies. I'm going to stop talking now before your brain explodes. Pip pip.
10/2/2010 c1 3Kristina Suko
Best autobiographical piece I've read to date. It made me laugh. Well done.
3Kristina SukoBest autobiographical piece I've read to date. It made me laugh. Well done.
7/28/2010 c1 HitchSlap
You clever, cheeky bastard. Of course you'd pull a stunt like this.
Not only was this an exceptional piece-and I'm sure you nailed an A on it-but you also inspired me to get something written, while I have 2 weeks of vacation left.
I also like the fact that you're a Lovecraft & Byron fan. Definitely two incredible writers.
PS. You know, you're really getting good at this writing thing. Seriously. Every time I read one of your pieces, it's so polished and well-crafted that I hope you're thinking of making a living out of this. Somehow. :p
You clever, cheeky bastard. Of course you'd pull a stunt like this.
Not only was this an exceptional piece-and I'm sure you nailed an A on it-but you also inspired me to get something written, while I have 2 weeks of vacation left.
I also like the fact that you're a Lovecraft & Byron fan. Definitely two incredible writers.
PS. You know, you're really getting good at this writing thing. Seriously. Every time I read one of your pieces, it's so polished and well-crafted that I hope you're thinking of making a living out of this. Somehow. :p
4/28/2010 c1 3dontneedyou
Wow, very effective, I believe. It's like how I feel, put into words. This is very, very good. Well written, too. Just the way you described everything and the style you managed to portray it in; magnificent. By the way, I checked out some of your music. You guys are pretty damn good.
-dontneedyou
3dontneedyouWow, very effective, I believe. It's like how I feel, put into words. This is very, very good. Well written, too. Just the way you described everything and the style you managed to portray it in; magnificent. By the way, I checked out some of your music. You guys are pretty damn good.
-dontneedyou
4/17/2010 c1 5F Persona
A very simple story but effective. I like how you personified the computer. Very easy to read and understand the casual, and easy tone. It was a little easy to see where you were going at the, but thats not a particularly bad thing. I sometimes find myself in similar sitautions. An intresting read.
5F PersonaA very simple story but effective. I like how you personified the computer. Very easy to read and understand the casual, and easy tone. It was a little easy to see where you were going at the, but thats not a particularly bad thing. I sometimes find myself in similar sitautions. An intresting read.