
7/9/2010 c1
19static shakedown
*sighs contentedly* This was wonderful.
It feels like a poem about first love-where there are insecurities and confusion over what to do . . . but there's also a certain pureness and genuineness in the relationship that sometimes gets lost when people get older . . .

*sighs contentedly* This was wonderful.
It feels like a poem about first love-where there are insecurities and confusion over what to do . . . but there's also a certain pureness and genuineness in the relationship that sometimes gets lost when people get older . . .
4/19/2010 c1
2Tragedyamist
This Poem is one of the best ive read in a long time.your words in this really show the love between the girl and the boy.

This Poem is one of the best ive read in a long time.your words in this really show the love between the girl and the boy.
4/18/2010 c1
159SingViolence
Aw, this is adorable. I can feel their love so easily, you wrote it well. "drunk off sleep deprivation" Genius. Thank you for writing!

Aw, this is adorable. I can feel their love so easily, you wrote it well. "drunk off sleep deprivation" Genius. Thank you for writing!
4/18/2010 c1
22Breathing Ice
This one took my breath away..`
'Basking in the gentle glow of dawn's pink fingers' ... WOW

This one took my breath away..`
'Basking in the gentle glow of dawn's pink fingers' ... WOW
4/18/2010 c1
9ace danger
Love, love, love this.
I wish there was a stronger word.
But really, I understand the feeling. It just doesn't seem like enough to describe it - that intense, beautiful, agonizing feeling. I wish I'd thought of this poem myself.
Again, love it. :)

Love, love, love this.
I wish there was a stronger word.
But really, I understand the feeling. It just doesn't seem like enough to describe it - that intense, beautiful, agonizing feeling. I wish I'd thought of this poem myself.
Again, love it. :)
4/18/2010 c1
2MasqueradeAngel
This is a great piece! the imagery you put into it is exactly why people like me love reading poems :) fantastic job.
M.A

This is a great piece! the imagery you put into it is exactly why people like me love reading poems :) fantastic job.
M.A