for prey7/10/2010 c1 
144chaos called creation
Favourite line: "heart clamouring like an angry child"
Oh, nonsensical love that I know all too well.
Keep writing!
144chaos called creationFavourite line: "heart clamouring like an angry child"
Oh, nonsensical love that I know all too well.
Keep writing!
7/1/2010 c1 recycle rhymes
i liked the prosy part of this. it made the poem that much more intense. maybe it was just all the periods.
i liked the prosy part of this. it made the poem that much more intense. maybe it was just all the periods.
4/19/2010 c1 159SingViolence
Dark, beautiful, and the feeling is well portrayed. It's unique! Thank you for writing!
159SingViolenceDark, beautiful, and the feeling is well portrayed. It's unique! Thank you for writing!