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4/13/2011 c2 1leavesfallingup
This is a very fascinating story thus far. I look forward to reading more. The way that you slowly reveal the details through Subject A's own discovery keeps the story interesting.
2/21/2011 c30 Kala
Ahh! i haven't checked this is for ever!

I was starting to think you just weren't gona finish it

silly me,

I loved it!(: a bunch i really hope you continue to make storys.
2/5/2011 c28 2CrossMyHeart
why did you kill kitty?

Mean.
1/28/2011 c1 Lissaroxs
I loved it. This story makes me loves sci-fi even more then I had already did.
1/28/2011 c30 Anonymoso
Seemed rushed. Was very confusing, but I'm sad to see the series is over. :(
1/27/2011 c30 6xXxfantasyfreakxXx
It all seemed a little rushed to me i think you could have done better but still i like it and i think you should continue.
1/24/2011 c29 1Major Samantha Carter
Hey, it's Major Sam Carter (not rlly) again, but now I have an account! I don't feel comfortable giving my name away online, so I use the name of my favorite TV show character.

Anyhoo, I luv this story! It's great and it's inspired me to write a story of my own, not that unlike it! Don't worry, it's very different. I wouldn't want to copy off your brilliant work.
1/23/2011 c26 kq101
I just went through and read the 30 chapters that are out and i have to say- this is a great story! You have exelent discription and the characters keep in character and don't have unrealistic strenght with no real weakness!

And the reason why i posted this review on chapter 26 instead of ch 30 is because chs 25 & 26 are the same chapter, thought you might want to know.

Please keep writing this great story!

~kittyqueen101
1/23/2011 c30 Major Samantha Carter
(again - yeah, right.)

I'm totally hooked on this story! I stayed up until one o' clock last night reading it. You need to post more or I think I might die!
1/23/2011 c24 Major Samantha Carter
(Major Carter. Yeah, right.)

lol alice in wonderland! if you're planning on getting this published, though, beware of copyright laws...
1/22/2011 c1 Major Samantha Carter
(Major Carter. Yeah, right.)

I really like it! The writing is great, the storyline is intriguing, the characters are believable. You might want to change the title to something a little less literal and more eye-catching.
1/22/2011 c30 kittygirl27
aw! great chapter! I really love V/A. It's so cute! :D
1/7/2011 c29 6UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND
Okay, I love this story. the characters you created are amazing, however, I think it could us a littole more action or emotion, I havn't really been able to connect with the characters.
1/7/2011 c24 UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND
100th reveiw, and I love the Alice-in-Wonderland like scene here!
1/5/2011 c29 Kala
Well it's about time!(:

I Loved it please keep updating!
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