
7/10/2016 c15 serwaverider
OKay, maybe ONE more chapter. I suppose it's useless to hope you turn into a horrible writer in the next chapter so I can stop binge reading? I know I have issues when it comes to cheating, which is strange because I've never been lucky enough to be in a relationship so I can't even blame it on past experiences but it just seems so hurtful and I really really don't like hurting people.
OKay, maybe ONE more chapter. I suppose it's useless to hope you turn into a horrible writer in the next chapter so I can stop binge reading? I know I have issues when it comes to cheating, which is strange because I've never been lucky enough to be in a relationship so I can't even blame it on past experiences but it just seems so hurtful and I really really don't like hurting people.
7/10/2016 c14 serwaverider
Struggle: OCD wants to finish what i started. Cheating is a dealbreaker for me though, break up first then I'll be heartbroken but at least you know where you stand/crumble. Cheat & it says you're not important enough for your feelings to be considered so I'll just be as disrepectful as I can to a person I told I loved. Maybe I can make it another chapter before it's just too depressing.
Struggle: OCD wants to finish what i started. Cheating is a dealbreaker for me though, break up first then I'll be heartbroken but at least you know where you stand/crumble. Cheat & it says you're not important enough for your feelings to be considered so I'll just be as disrepectful as I can to a person I told I loved. Maybe I can make it another chapter before it's just too depressing.
7/10/2016 c10 serwaverider
Brendon should have made it official if Mars didn't have the balls too, he still cheated, and will have hurt Josh. If your happiness has to hurt others you are an arsehole and don't deserve happiness, which with cheaters is usually the case as who can trust someone they've been betrayed by? Though also usually cheaters don'e care.
Brendon should have made it official if Mars didn't have the balls too, he still cheated, and will have hurt Josh. If your happiness has to hurt others you are an arsehole and don't deserve happiness, which with cheaters is usually the case as who can trust someone they've been betrayed by? Though also usually cheaters don'e care.
7/10/2016 c8 serwaverider
Not so sure I want to read on now, have very STRONG views about cheating. You can change your mind but if you don't break up with your current first it should be a minimum of 25 years in prison, no parole!
Not so sure I want to read on now, have very STRONG views about cheating. You can change your mind but if you don't break up with your current first it should be a minimum of 25 years in prison, no parole!
2/16/2014 c4
4ImmanenceEnsured
Uhm, what's with all the girl-hate?
I get that these characters are supposedly the hottest, most adorable boys in town, but these girls at least appear to be mildly intelligent, they shouldn't be made into pathetically wailing laughing stocks for the purpose of giving M and B extra praise. And the way Brendon heartlessly comments on Stella's crying? Ugh. He's not a nice guy, and the opposite of a gentleman. Mars also handled that extremely poorly, considering she's supposed to be his best friend. Never would I want a friend like Mars. He figuratively punched her in the face by ruthlessly attacking her feelings like that.
I like the way this story flows, but this is too much. Girls shouldn't be bashed for the sake of elevating the main gay couple.

Uhm, what's with all the girl-hate?
I get that these characters are supposedly the hottest, most adorable boys in town, but these girls at least appear to be mildly intelligent, they shouldn't be made into pathetically wailing laughing stocks for the purpose of giving M and B extra praise. And the way Brendon heartlessly comments on Stella's crying? Ugh. He's not a nice guy, and the opposite of a gentleman. Mars also handled that extremely poorly, considering she's supposed to be his best friend. Never would I want a friend like Mars. He figuratively punched her in the face by ruthlessly attacking her feelings like that.
I like the way this story flows, but this is too much. Girls shouldn't be bashed for the sake of elevating the main gay couple.
10/13/2012 c9
16One Last Note
I have to say that I find this story very good because it is so fast-paced though I must admit that I miss the humour aspect of your other stories! Please bring more funnies into it later...they're what enthused me in other stories. Other than that, I am thoroughly enjoying the story and will continue reading!

I have to say that I find this story very good because it is so fast-paced though I must admit that I miss the humour aspect of your other stories! Please bring more funnies into it later...they're what enthused me in other stories. Other than that, I am thoroughly enjoying the story and will continue reading!
7/1/2012 c16
1Nuitdemeztli
wow I never thought he was going back that soon. Cant wait to read more of this.

wow I never thought he was going back that soon. Cant wait to read more of this.
7/1/2012 c14 Nuitdemeztli
this was so emotional. Brendons a nice guy. I think that he n Mars should keep in touch and see what happens if they can b together again or not. I like that Justing asked Josh out. I think theyd do good together. I like Jake, I feel related to him, very much.
this was so emotional. Brendons a nice guy. I think that he n Mars should keep in touch and see what happens if they can b together again or not. I like that Justing asked Josh out. I think theyd do good together. I like Jake, I feel related to him, very much.