for Rewriting the Soul1/19/2015 c1 
9EmeraldTurtle
First of all, love your formatting, it adds a lot to your piece. This is very interesting to me, it's a thought-provoking poem and I like that.
9EmeraldTurtleFirst of all, love your formatting, it adds a lot to your piece. This is very interesting to me, it's a thought-provoking poem and I like that.
12/21/2014 c1 9Leo Winsiel
Wow. I love you choice of words and how you've written them. Another great work my friend :D
This is truly a wonderful work!
Yeah :D
9Leo WinsielWow. I love you choice of words and how you've written them. Another great work my friend :D
This is truly a wonderful work!
Yeah :D
12/17/2014 c1 101Tasting Light
Beautiful and simple, I can see this as what dictates our every day lives.
101Tasting LightBeautiful and simple, I can see this as what dictates our every day lives.
11/4/2014 c1 25xKathrynAlicex
I like this, it's a great representation of innocence and corruption, maybe though you could explore this some more? Maybe explore the grey as well as the black and the white if you know what I mean? Well written!
25xKathrynAlicexI like this, it's a great representation of innocence and corruption, maybe though you could explore this some more? Maybe explore the grey as well as the black and the white if you know what I mean? Well written!
6/22/2014 c1 Mary
Good one...I think I have MANY sides heehee
Good one...I think I have MANY sides heehee
6/18/2014 c1 15WilliamtheDork
Uniquely AWESOME. Haha, blunt, I know, but this is so very. . . True. Not to mention the flow. . .
15WilliamtheDorkUniquely AWESOME. Haha, blunt, I know, but this is so very. . . True. Not to mention the flow. . .
5/2/2011 c1 23JustMiLuc
This poem has a really beautiful flow to it. I think amateur poetry will always be my favorite. There is some kind of simplicity and freshness to it, and I think that is really portrayed in this poem.
23JustMiLucThis poem has a really beautiful flow to it. I think amateur poetry will always be my favorite. There is some kind of simplicity and freshness to it, and I think that is really portrayed in this poem.
6/25/2010 c1 173Little girl Big world
This holds a lot of truth. There's two sides to everything.
"As spring arrives
A white flower
Begins to bloom
So Innocently"
Favorite lines.
173Little girl Big worldThis holds a lot of truth. There's two sides to everything.
"As spring arrives
A white flower
Begins to bloom
So Innocently"
Favorite lines.
6/24/2010 c1 22the.quiet.one24
I really like this one. You have two choices and you just never know where you'll go.
22the.quiet.one24I really like this one. You have two choices and you just never know where you'll go.
6/16/2010 c1 24TheFantabulousPandemonium
I think this is one of my favorites. I love the message it conveys, as well as the way you've written it.
24TheFantabulousPandemoniumI think this is one of my favorites. I love the message it conveys, as well as the way you've written it.
6/10/2010 c1 14SilverStream101
Absolutely LOVE it! This will be going onto my favourites! Really well done!
14SilverStream101Absolutely LOVE it! This will be going onto my favourites! Really well done!
6/9/2010 c1 35Coexist
Whoa. I love this. I love how you spaced it on the page to illustrate the differences.
35CoexistWhoa. I love this. I love how you spaced it on the page to illustrate the differences.
6/9/2010 c1 24unique.echo
I gotta say, this is probably the best poem I've read and therefore my favorite of your poems. I like how calm and peaceful it is in the beginning and then how destructive and angry it is at the end. Very true, about the two sides of a coin. :)
Great job!
24unique.echoI gotta say, this is probably the best poem I've read and therefore my favorite of your poems. I like how calm and peaceful it is in the beginning and then how destructive and angry it is at the end. Very true, about the two sides of a coin. :)
Great job!