for Gabe8/8/2010 c1 
27Averick
This. Is. Excellent! I love it, the pace is awesome, not too fast or too slow, just right for the story you are telling. Poor Gabe :( But excellent story! Is there more to it? Anyway, I love this! Angst, horror, and blood...my fav combination, lol. Anywho, nicely done!
27AverickThis. Is. Excellent! I love it, the pace is awesome, not too fast or too slow, just right for the story you are telling. Poor Gabe :( But excellent story! Is there more to it? Anyway, I love this! Angst, horror, and blood...my fav combination, lol. Anywho, nicely done!
5/14/2010 c1 11DiexGaaf
... 0.o gaspeth.
This story is so... so, so- AWESOME!
I mean, it was about 500 words more than what I'd usually read per chapter but, hey, I'm not complaining!
Are you going to write more? Because I will read it, without a doubt.
11DiexGaaf... 0.o gaspeth.
This story is so... so, so- AWESOME!
I mean, it was about 500 words more than what I'd usually read per chapter but, hey, I'm not complaining!
Are you going to write more? Because I will read it, without a doubt.
4/29/2010 c1 5Jazzy-Baby
Great story :) I'm afraid I'm not as great of a review giver as you but it's really good :) The beginning was my favorite, I felt like I was actually in the story :P Great job :)
5Jazzy-BabyGreat story :) I'm afraid I'm not as great of a review giver as you but it's really good :) The beginning was my favorite, I felt like I was actually in the story :P Great job :)
4/28/2010 c1 6Lauren Andrea
H...I am truly speechless...well not literally, but well...this was really deep. For me anyway. And the writing was amazing. As was the connections between the characters. Jeez... Well, I hope to read more soon! And I can't help but wander, is this a true story? Maybe that was obvious, huh? #gazing up at ceiling blankly# Or maybe it isn't a true story? Now I'm just confusing myself...
Anywho, while I go and heavily contemplate the meaning of contemplating, you keep on at it ;-)
!Vamp X'er -XoX-
6Lauren AndreaH...I am truly speechless...well not literally, but well...this was really deep. For me anyway. And the writing was amazing. As was the connections between the characters. Jeez... Well, I hope to read more soon! And I can't help but wander, is this a true story? Maybe that was obvious, huh? #gazing up at ceiling blankly# Or maybe it isn't a true story? Now I'm just confusing myself...
Anywho, while I go and heavily contemplate the meaning of contemplating, you keep on at it ;-)
!Vamp X'er -XoX-