for teacups2/19/2013 c1 
3fellintothemoon
Hi there, darling! Good news. This poem has been reviewed by yours truly and has been added to the A Drop of Romeo site under the Poetry category. Here's your review:
Melissa Thinks: You know a poem is good when it gives you chills; this one did that and more. "teacups" is absolutely stunning. his terrible beauty does something with words that just makes me melt. For such a short amount of words, emotion seems to be bursting out of the piece. The angst, heartbreak, confusion, love: they all just hit you in the face while reading. The words seem almost lyrical, flowing like warm butter on toast. "teacups" has a steady rhythym, an intense message, it's easy to follow, and it leaves you breathless.
3fellintothemoonHi there, darling! Good news. This poem has been reviewed by yours truly and has been added to the A Drop of Romeo site under the Poetry category. Here's your review:
Melissa Thinks: You know a poem is good when it gives you chills; this one did that and more. "teacups" is absolutely stunning. his terrible beauty does something with words that just makes me melt. For such a short amount of words, emotion seems to be bursting out of the piece. The angst, heartbreak, confusion, love: they all just hit you in the face while reading. The words seem almost lyrical, flowing like warm butter on toast. "teacups" has a steady rhythym, an intense message, it's easy to follow, and it leaves you breathless.
10/16/2011 c1 Awesome. Sauce
This is wonderful. Sauce. And accurate. Sauce. And just basically amazing and self-regretful and you've probably guessed who this is by now haven't you.
Anyway, a job extremely well done *hands over cookies and metronomes*
This is wonderful. Sauce. And accurate. Sauce. And just basically amazing and self-regretful and you've probably guessed who this is by now haven't you.
Anyway, a job extremely well done *hands over cookies and metronomes*
4/23/2011 c1 25Kyllex
This.
It's good. Real good.
I love it; it almost sounds like it could be the lyrics to a song. A really sad song, but still. I can't write poetry worth crap, so these kinds of things never cease to amaze me.
Nice job!
25KyllexThis.
It's good. Real good.
I love it; it almost sounds like it could be the lyrics to a song. A really sad song, but still. I can't write poetry worth crap, so these kinds of things never cease to amaze me.
Nice job!
8/29/2010 c1 24fairies and snapple
I kinda love this. Because it describes that wretched late-night reconsideration so well. Lovely.
24fairies and snappleI kinda love this. Because it describes that wretched late-night reconsideration so well. Lovely.
5/26/2010 c1 Sakiikumi2
Poetry has always been one of the things i don't like. I just never read it. But i stumbled upon this and really, you are a beautiful writer. You can fit so much emotion into so little words. You've got real talent :)
Poetry has always been one of the things i don't like. I just never read it. But i stumbled upon this and really, you are a beautiful writer. You can fit so much emotion into so little words. You've got real talent :)
5/3/2010 c1 2before it rains
this is gorgeous.
i applaud you for writing something so morbidtwistedlovely.
definitely faving,
-daniā„
2before it rainsthis is gorgeous.
i applaud you for writing something so morbidtwistedlovely.
definitely faving,
-daniā„