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5/3/2010 c1 22PoetryMagic12
Another amazing poem

My favorite

Nightmares are the ones that show,

Our deepest fears,

Of getting lost in the snow,

Of getting caught in gears,

Or falling deep down below.

Both visit us in the dark,

Although they have different means,

To worm their way into our heart,

They listen to or ignore our keens

Those are just such powerful and awesome lines...It's beautiful how you explained a nightmare...

Anyway thanks for reviewing Love's Flower...I am glad you liked it I was wondering if you can review "Tantrums of the Sun", "This Song" and "Rewriting the Song"...I also put up another new poem "Her Reason" It would mean alot if I had yout opinion. Anyway love this poem...I can't wait until you put up more...keep writing

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