
9/9/2019 c1 j0rja
Well thanks for the heartbreak. I'm just going to imagine she ends up with someone amazing and in the future he regrets everything if he cheated becuase I can't stand people who cheat.
Well thanks for the heartbreak. I'm just going to imagine she ends up with someone amazing and in the future he regrets everything if he cheated becuase I can't stand people who cheat.
7/24/2010 c1 natmarie
I really really like this one. The style is very unique and the message that comes hurtling at you when you get to the end is quite a jolt of reality, one that I think everyone can relate to. At least I can relate to. The italics added in bursts of humor while still getting their point across. Lovely little drabble.
I really really like this one. The style is very unique and the message that comes hurtling at you when you get to the end is quite a jolt of reality, one that I think everyone can relate to. At least I can relate to. The italics added in bursts of humor while still getting their point across. Lovely little drabble.
7/1/2010 c1
3HPRK08
This.. is wonderful. Seriously, amazing idea!
'you didn't always get to be the heroine.'
Great work, amazing.
x
HPRK0

This.. is wonderful. Seriously, amazing idea!
'you didn't always get to be the heroine.'
Great work, amazing.
x
HPRK0
6/13/2010 c1
7Silencia
aw... this is so sad... poor girl... but I also feel for the guy... it's pretty hard picking sides when not knowing the whole story xD
Grtz Silencia

aw... this is so sad... poor girl... but I also feel for the guy... it's pretty hard picking sides when not knowing the whole story xD
Grtz Silencia
6/4/2010 c1 Artume
Oh my goodness that was so SAD! I absolutely LOVED it! It was so true! You can't always expect a happily-ever-after...aw. :( Magnificent job. I like how you've structured the sentences, it makes the flow like a series of flashes, from one scene to another. Fab job!
Oh my goodness that was so SAD! I absolutely LOVED it! It was so true! You can't always expect a happily-ever-after...aw. :( Magnificent job. I like how you've structured the sentences, it makes the flow like a series of flashes, from one scene to another. Fab job!
5/5/2010 c1 DemonsAngel
i am in love! do you mind if i marry this story :)
i am in love! do you mind if i marry this story :)