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5/5/2010 c1 53Nick Ransom
"The lovely lady continues to smile, wiping a smear of Spaghetti Western from her cheek. "

Fucking brilliance. This is amazing, there's so much I like about it, just, gah. Everything.
5/5/2010 c1 102firemounrain
Very surrealistic! I like the disdain for pop culture and the futuristic scifi elements of the flag and the real-time airbrushing! I don't think it has enough initial explanation to ground the reader in your created reality.

However, I very much admire your use of adjectives and good grammar.

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