9/9/2018 c1 fanatla
Hello Taa,

The premise of this story is very interesting: the gangster who suddenly hears again the voice of conscience and ruins a child prostitution business, putting his boss and colleagues against him. I liked the narrative rhythm and the characterization of the characters, but being this one-shot I feel as if I had read a chapter of many in a longer story ... I needed Donny's past and what happens with him in the future.

I hope to read other original works of yours later on.

Regards,

Fana