for A nonexistent kiss5/8/2010 c1 
14LittleBlueOcean
This is beautiful.
I have a best friend who can relate to this. I will be showing her this wonderful poem! Great job. :)
14LittleBlueOceanThis is beautiful.
I have a best friend who can relate to this. I will be showing her this wonderful poem! Great job. :)
5/7/2010 c1 3Nabootique
This is very good.
However, I suggest that you change the presentation of this poem, especially since you changed the rhyme scheme halfway through. Aside from that, it's very good. Especially the last part (the italics make it seem like wishful thinking). Kudos :]
3NabootiqueThis is very good.
However, I suggest that you change the presentation of this poem, especially since you changed the rhyme scheme halfway through. Aside from that, it's very good. Especially the last part (the italics make it seem like wishful thinking). Kudos :]