for Autophobia9/30/2015 c1 
6Yellow Glass
Okay. Sam going back to Jake at the end? It was a good twist. Although I think it would've been better if you didn't put the "Maybe it's not so bad" line. That would've made the twist more unexpected, like, Holy SHIIIIII WHAAA unexpected. Also: gosh I like the tone, a bit bland at times but it works in giving off a hopeless and I-am-so-done vibe.
6Yellow GlassOkay. Sam going back to Jake at the end? It was a good twist. Although I think it would've been better if you didn't put the "Maybe it's not so bad" line. That would've made the twist more unexpected, like, Holy SHIIIIII WHAAA unexpected. Also: gosh I like the tone, a bit bland at times but it works in giving off a hopeless and I-am-so-done vibe.
7/21/2014 c1 6DirtyBooks
I'm confused. Is this finished? I'm really enjoying it but I can't tell if it's done or not. Doesn't seem over.
6DirtyBooksI'm confused. Is this finished? I'm really enjoying it but I can't tell if it's done or not. Doesn't seem over.
4/29/2014 c1 3Catkac
Ah, that last line is kind of confusing. He ran... towards Sam? Away from him? Towards Sam ready to eat him?
By your descriptions I'm guessing there is a zombie virus or something going around?
And does Jake retain his wit or does he become a mindless walking corpse?
3CatkacAh, that last line is kind of confusing. He ran... towards Sam? Away from him? Towards Sam ready to eat him?
By your descriptions I'm guessing there is a zombie virus or something going around?
And does Jake retain his wit or does he become a mindless walking corpse?
12/23/2012 c1 Guest
Oh God that was beautiful. I am truly floored. Well done indeed
Oh God that was beautiful. I am truly floored. Well done indeed
2/8/2012 c1 Bumblebee
Is there any point beyond crying? If there is, I've reached it :|
I'll just pretend that Jake and Sam somehow turned into vampires, then HEA :')
Is there any point beyond crying? If there is, I've reached it :|
I'll just pretend that Jake and Sam somehow turned into vampires, then HEA :')
12/21/2011 c1 4Regal Coat Woman's Daughter
...Wait, Jake got turned into one of them, right?
So is he like, sane still?
4Regal Coat Woman's Daughter...Wait, Jake got turned into one of them, right?
So is he like, sane still?
7/27/2011 c1 JudasMonster
Hello, this story is kewl. Cool story bro. But, can someone explain what happened at the end?
Did the dude like run and go infect Sam so they like could be like zombies together forever or something. Or was it like did he like run away? Explain please :/ Ikr, there's like so many likes. I'm usually more eloquent than this :/
Hello, this story is kewl. Cool story bro. But, can someone explain what happened at the end?
Did the dude like run and go infect Sam so they like could be like zombies together forever or something. Or was it like did he like run away? Explain please :/ Ikr, there's like so many likes. I'm usually more eloquent than this :/
7/23/2011 c1 Mangatake
Wow. Beautiful. Also, very scary. Never read anything so bleak, love it.
Wow. Beautiful. Also, very scary. Never read anything so bleak, love it.
6/19/2011 c1 1Morgue Chan
Oh my gosh! i can't stop freaking crying TT_TT. . . i mean, i kinda had a feeling it was going to happen but . . . oh my gosh why! any way, it's not often i come across a story that gets me all worked up and emotional. . . you write very well. . . I'm going to go cry some more now . . .
1Morgue ChanOh my gosh! i can't stop freaking crying TT_TT. . . i mean, i kinda had a feeling it was going to happen but . . . oh my gosh why! any way, it's not often i come across a story that gets me all worked up and emotional. . . you write very well. . . I'm going to go cry some more now . . .
6/16/2011 c1 lunasea
Wow..just..wow. That's all i can say. Just, i loved it. i love stories like this that are based in times like these and theres still a sliver of love involved...and god did i bawl like a baby at the end. I love it love it love it, you my dear are a genius.
Wow..just..wow. That's all i can say. Just, i loved it. i love stories like this that are based in times like these and theres still a sliver of love involved...and god did i bawl like a baby at the end. I love it love it love it, you my dear are a genius.