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I think you should know your story is on Goodreads under the name Kitty Parker. Title is Of Love and Other Inconsequential Things.
I think you should know your story is on Goodreads under the name Kitty Parker. Title is Of Love and Other Inconsequential Things.
8/9/2013 c20 VioletColes
No its over! i can't live anymore! There is no purpose in life for me now without this story! I guess all i can do is say god bless the author for having such talent in writing and creating a amazing book. Now i have to go find me a Jesse
No its over! i can't live anymore! There is no purpose in life for me now without this story! I guess all i can do is say god bless the author for having such talent in writing and creating a amazing book. Now i have to go find me a Jesse
5/20/2013 c1 
5DarlingLiquids
Really good. Great progression here.
P.S. Truebies unite! Team Eric, b****es!
5DarlingLiquidsReally good. Great progression here.
P.S. Truebies unite! Team Eric, b****es!
12/31/2012 c1 Guest
AWSUM!
AWSUM!
11/21/2012 c1 Adriana.Fletch69
OMG! I love the story and i was really hoping that you would finish the Jesse's side? *pout*pout*? :(
OMG! I love the story and i was really hoping that you would finish the Jesse's side? *pout*pout*? :(
1/23/2012 c20 1CinnaBon
This is such an adorable story. I could not stop laughing! I wish I was a bit more like Sadie, she's hilarious!
1CinnaBonThis is such an adorable story. I could not stop laughing! I wish I was a bit more like Sadie, she's hilarious!
12/16/2011 c1 2Twistedin2Delusions
I have read the true blood series and watched a few episodes and I think Eric is hotter. Now as much as I love true blood (I own the entire series of books) don't hate on Twilight. Sure Edward (Robert Patterson(or is it Pattenson?)) is ugly and Bella is dumb butit is of epic proportions. I used to think it was stupid when Twilight the movie came out too but my friend turned me into a fan.
Anyway I like you're writing so far and will read past the first chapter. I just thought I'd write this before I forgot. ;)
2Twistedin2DelusionsI have read the true blood series and watched a few episodes and I think Eric is hotter. Now as much as I love true blood (I own the entire series of books) don't hate on Twilight. Sure Edward (Robert Patterson(or is it Pattenson?)) is ugly and Bella is dumb butit is of epic proportions. I used to think it was stupid when Twilight the movie came out too but my friend turned me into a fan.
Anyway I like you're writing so far and will read past the first chapter. I just thought I'd write this before I forgot. ;)
10/1/2011 c20 sakuranbochan
wow. the ending is so dissatisfying. :(
I really love this story and i would love to read 100 chapters about Sadie and Jessie. I even stayed up late after midnight to continue reading it.
However, i feel really disappointed that you ended it like this. I just couldn't feel the love in chapter 20. :( you rushed it like it was a nuisance to keep writing.
i don't see why you stopped(no excuses please).
I love Sadie and i will probably never encounter a heroine as cute and genuine as her. seriously, most heroine in published novels are either whimpy, damsels in distress, or strong(yet harsh with words). Sadie is mentally strong, naturally innocent, sweet, nice, and not afraid to show herself to the world as an intellectual badass. :)
Jessie is too hot. i can't get him out of my mind. he's also unrealistically sweet. And i'm a sucker for sweet guys. he's not a jerk, never started as a jerk. just acted childish a bit, but really who isn't childish? if i were him, i'd probably hit Sadie too with a volleyball if i could aim. jerks are jerks who's a manwhore, unreasonable, and has evil intentions. yep.
i love how jessie is so determined in what he does, like with sports. he's sweet, nice, considerate, playfully cocky but humble in the inside. definitely not overly proud.
seriously. i love this story.
why. can't. you. continue. it...? ;_;
you are going to make mee crrrryyy.
it's like you taking away all the sweet stuff i'll ever be able to get my hands on because, god knows how many stories are out there that actually has original personalities, genuine characters who doesn't piss you off in the least.
...
okay, so maybe sadie did piss me off a little bit. she pissed me off in the last chapter. chapter 20. when she kissed ben on the lips. like, what the hell? why on the lips? D: and jessie's like, awww you love me? i love you too, sadie!, after seeing sadie kissing ben. -.- i don't blame them though. author, i really dislike you for making them end up like that. i loved them before chapter 20. i really really loved them. i still love them now. just a little less than how much i adore them in chapter 19.
Dear author, i hope this looooong. unexpectedly long, yet i knew this was coming. would make you regret. i hope you learned something from my comment if you actually did read this hell of a long review. i hope you repent on not to ever. ever. rush. readers notice it. they won't like it. they'd hate it if it's in a crucial important scene in the story. for example, lets say, THE ENDING.*insert tear here*.
I feel bad for ranting at you, author, but i feel hurt. I'd like you to understand my appreciation for creating this wonderful, insanely hard not to get obsessed with, story. I would also like it if you would create a series of this. THE TALES OF SADIE BARKER NUMBA TWO. just to cheer your fans up (especially me). if you need help. please ask me. i'd do anything to get involved in THE TALES O SADIE BARKER NUMBA TWO. :)
like seriously. I'll do anything for you if you need help for the tales of sadie barker numba two. believe me when i wrote that because guess what? i've been looking at the "review: xxxx characters" counter while writing this. IT WENT TO 9000+ TO 6000+, which means i wrote about 3000 letters. JUST. FO. YUU. :D
so.
pretty. pretty. pretty. please,
because i know you're pretty inside and out,
will accept anything with a cherry on top.
so...
pretty, pretty, pretty, please,
with a cherry on top,
continue the adventures of Sadie Barker and Jessie Williams?
*insert Jessie's sexy puppy eyes here* c:
phew~. glad im done typing.
wow. the ending is so dissatisfying. :(
I really love this story and i would love to read 100 chapters about Sadie and Jessie. I even stayed up late after midnight to continue reading it.
However, i feel really disappointed that you ended it like this. I just couldn't feel the love in chapter 20. :( you rushed it like it was a nuisance to keep writing.
i don't see why you stopped(no excuses please).
I love Sadie and i will probably never encounter a heroine as cute and genuine as her. seriously, most heroine in published novels are either whimpy, damsels in distress, or strong(yet harsh with words). Sadie is mentally strong, naturally innocent, sweet, nice, and not afraid to show herself to the world as an intellectual badass. :)
Jessie is too hot. i can't get him out of my mind. he's also unrealistically sweet. And i'm a sucker for sweet guys. he's not a jerk, never started as a jerk. just acted childish a bit, but really who isn't childish? if i were him, i'd probably hit Sadie too with a volleyball if i could aim. jerks are jerks who's a manwhore, unreasonable, and has evil intentions. yep.
i love how jessie is so determined in what he does, like with sports. he's sweet, nice, considerate, playfully cocky but humble in the inside. definitely not overly proud.
seriously. i love this story.
why. can't. you. continue. it...? ;_;
you are going to make mee crrrryyy.
it's like you taking away all the sweet stuff i'll ever be able to get my hands on because, god knows how many stories are out there that actually has original personalities, genuine characters who doesn't piss you off in the least.
...
okay, so maybe sadie did piss me off a little bit. she pissed me off in the last chapter. chapter 20. when she kissed ben on the lips. like, what the hell? why on the lips? D: and jessie's like, awww you love me? i love you too, sadie!, after seeing sadie kissing ben. -.- i don't blame them though. author, i really dislike you for making them end up like that. i loved them before chapter 20. i really really loved them. i still love them now. just a little less than how much i adore them in chapter 19.
Dear author, i hope this looooong. unexpectedly long, yet i knew this was coming. would make you regret. i hope you learned something from my comment if you actually did read this hell of a long review. i hope you repent on not to ever. ever. rush. readers notice it. they won't like it. they'd hate it if it's in a crucial important scene in the story. for example, lets say, THE ENDING.*insert tear here*.
I feel bad for ranting at you, author, but i feel hurt. I'd like you to understand my appreciation for creating this wonderful, insanely hard not to get obsessed with, story. I would also like it if you would create a series of this. THE TALES OF SADIE BARKER NUMBA TWO. just to cheer your fans up (especially me). if you need help. please ask me. i'd do anything to get involved in THE TALES O SADIE BARKER NUMBA TWO. :)
like seriously. I'll do anything for you if you need help for the tales of sadie barker numba two. believe me when i wrote that because guess what? i've been looking at the "review: xxxx characters" counter while writing this. IT WENT TO 9000+ TO 6000+, which means i wrote about 3000 letters. JUST. FO. YUU. :D
so.
pretty. pretty. pretty. please,
because i know you're pretty inside and out,
will accept anything with a cherry on top.
so...
pretty, pretty, pretty, please,
with a cherry on top,
continue the adventures of Sadie Barker and Jessie Williams?
*insert Jessie's sexy puppy eyes here* c:
phew~. glad im done typing.
8/17/2011 c20 PurpleMunchBunch
wow this story was really good! though i dont understand how they got from a few days before the dance in their class to after class then the dance, but still good, and really funny! i think i am quite alot like sadie, just the crazy bit... :D
wow this story was really good! though i dont understand how they got from a few days before the dance in their class to after class then the dance, but still good, and really funny! i think i am quite alot like sadie, just the crazy bit... :D
7/31/2011 c20 5Juliet Scar
I love Sadie's UTTER RANDOMNESS! NARNIA! Ohhhh god. Haha. And and haha he's like "Why?" Llamas. Hehe. LLAMA. That sounds like something a goat would say... or...er hummm? I LAUGH SO HARD MY BACK STARTED HURTING at the whole kufu thing in the graveyard! Hehar. This is definitely a story loosen up anyone. Anyone that still has that lingering child energy that is. I LOVED TTOSB! NARNIA...haha... :D
~ Juliet
5Juliet ScarI love Sadie's UTTER RANDOMNESS! NARNIA! Ohhhh god. Haha. And and haha he's like "Why?" Llamas. Hehe. LLAMA. That sounds like something a goat would say... or...er hummm? I LAUGH SO HARD MY BACK STARTED HURTING at the whole kufu thing in the graveyard! Hehar. This is definitely a story loosen up anyone. Anyone that still has that lingering child energy that is. I LOVED TTOSB! NARNIA...haha... :D
~ Juliet
6/12/2011 c20 MakingMyHeartBeatAgain
The ending was kind of abrupt and rushed, but over all I really enjoyed reading this whole story!
I do feel like you kind of fell off the beaten path with the plot in terms of mentioning Haley and stuff, because they're room mates and you made it seem as if they never spoke. Which is hard to believe if they sleep in the same room every night, you know? Lol and because you mentioned Haley and Sadie both as having only each other as friends. It's fine for Sadie because she has Jesse but you never said anything about Haley so it's kind of like you just let her be a loner.
Very good story, I was thoroughly entertained.
Keep writing! xxxx
-Mina
The ending was kind of abrupt and rushed, but over all I really enjoyed reading this whole story!
I do feel like you kind of fell off the beaten path with the plot in terms of mentioning Haley and stuff, because they're room mates and you made it seem as if they never spoke. Which is hard to believe if they sleep in the same room every night, you know? Lol and because you mentioned Haley and Sadie both as having only each other as friends. It's fine for Sadie because she has Jesse but you never said anything about Haley so it's kind of like you just let her be a loner.
Very good story, I was thoroughly entertained.
Keep writing! xxxx
-Mina